Reviews for His RelinquishmentBy : lexiatel |
And the 'got' in forgot lol 😂😖🙄 sorry.
-Silversal
I for the 'not' next to Hermione name in my review. It's still an awesome story. 😜
-silversal
WTF?! What the hell is going on now?! LoL it's like the 'Twilight zone' up is down and Hermione has changed and for the better, I really thought she was going fight long/hard (that's what she said! LoL) with the curse/spell or be faking it to get access to the Library, that would have been nice to see but I trust your judgment as a great writer. Keep up the awesome work hope to see something soon.
-silversal
This chapter was AMAZING! I can't wait for the next chapter! Yay!! Hermione did figure it out, but she also lost her memory too.... I wonder how this is going to effect her and her abilities towards Malfoy. I am soooooooooooo happy to hear that she was faking it, she fooled me too until the line "it's quite strong… I was barely managing myself…" that line had me thinking, was she able to still be herself, while under the influence of the kiss? Man, I tell you are keeping me from truly figuring this story out, which is amazing! I am ususally able to figure out a story, but yours has soo many twists and turns that I just have to hold on and enjoy the ride. Now as for malfoy, I can't believe he's getting cut up right now! I totally thought he was having a nightmare or something, until the guy started going into detail about Hermione's and Draco's relationship. I truly can't wait until the next chapter!!
Another great chapter. So did Bernice actually kill Blaise? Definitely deserved it.
who is the butcher sent to torture draco?
waiting for more.
patty
What's with the reviews? The one I just submitted comes up anonymous!
Never thought I'd say this but I feel sorry for Draco. Shame he can't experience true love. As for Blaise, hope someone turns him into people burger. And feeds him to dragons before he can contaminate Sam.
Where do I begin, where do I begin?!? First and for most I want inform you that you have written a LOVELY story and I can't wait until the next chapter! Now lets start with Hermione first!!! She's scaring me with her compliance, I don't want her to be a mindless puppet! I want my fiery and intelligent Hermione back!! I want her fighting draco, like yesterday! Secondly, BERNICE, she's being a fake, a lovely will, acting fake!!! I can't believe she hasn't taken to the spell of the kiss, why hasn't she?!? Bernice really has been playing her part to protect her family and Samuel! I love that! And LONGBOTTOM!! That intelligent bastard!! I can't believe he's forming an army as we speak, he's bold and less fearful! Can't believe he doesn't mind erasing Hermione's memory. How daring!! I truly can't wait until the next chapter begins, because I was totally surprised by this chapter!! Can't wait for the next twisted chapter!
I'm bummed. Had an awesome review for you and the the wifi acts goofy.
Wonderful chapters. (I'm finally caught up).
Hermione will gain knowledge from the library and will work around the spell.
Hopefully Draco will be in agreement and learn a few things while under the spell.
I pictured the new Lady Malfoy's garden in my mind. She will have an assortment of flowers and plants that will represent regret sadness hope and love. Neville may be some help on this. There will be a family statue in her part of the garden. Husband sitting on the ground with his arm around his wife's waist. She will have a child using her lap as a pillow sleeping. There will be another child holding dad's hand while butterflies flitter above the toddler. Once her portion of the garden is done Hermione may go and seach out portraits of the Ladies who were unable to complete there portion while alive. She will offer her assistance to them.
Waiting for more.
Thank you for the updates.
Patty aka pickles87
I just want Blaise terminated with extreme prejudice. A psycho like him deserves it. And I hope Draco gets what he deserves too, although he's not evil like Blaise.
I can't tell you how much this story is drawing me in. I can't wait for an update! I think many fics can sometimes write Hermione as losing her spirit pretty quickly but I like the fact you never lose that in your characterisation.
I love your writing! Can't wait to see what's next.
Nice
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