Reviews for His RelinquishmentBy : lexiatel |
You have me hooked on this story and now it stops!! Is there an ending at all??!'
Ever finished?? Got me in
Enjoyed this will try to follow if I can figure it out
It's so interesting that both opposing sides in this story -- Jordan's camp and Voldemort's followers--are dark and there aren't really any 'good guys' to root for. Makes Draco's self-interest seem to be the only sensible course of action.
Wow, so many plot twists in the last few chapters! I'm enjoying all the surprises.
I am on pins and needles, my friend. You know that right? Do you have any idea what you are doing to us, aka your readers? I know I don't comment often, I just felt an urge to. :) Great chapter and I can't wait for the next one. <3
Whoa!! So who is this imposter Harry and Neville? mhhmmm Very interesting two chapters!!! Thank you sooooo much for the updates! I can't wait until the next chapter!!
i am absolutely in love with this story. It is BEAUTIFULLY written. I'm a Lit major and it takes a lot to impress me but this has had me checking for updates daily. I love how canon draco is because it makes everything really easy to swallow. Can't wait for the next update.
it just keeps getting better and better!!!
Oh lordy I can't wait too find out what malfoy does and Hermione....wow! Looking forward too more!
I don't know if you have plans for Bernice's new love interest, but if not or if you're still not sure, can I make a litlle request ? Would you consider shipping her with Harry ? it would be lovely to see her trying (but maybe not totally) to heal from her scars (Blaise and her ex what's his name) and falling in love with a man like Harry.
He would never abuse her, or betrayed her, and yes she's pretty badass, she can stand without men, it's just a suggestion, besides it's your story.
Besides, I'm tired to see him with Ginny... just no.
Oh! Is 'Voldemort' a taboo word in this fic? If so, death eaters are coming!
I was surprised at Draco's cowardly behaviour, given that he's appeared to be rather strong(struggling for the right word) in the fic so far. Is it the spell? I almost thought it was Sam (the kid) instead of Draco aha.
Ugh, I really want Blaise to die, but I also want him to live. Not because I like him! That would be weird aha. He adds a special type of humour and entertainment to the chapters I think, and him with Bernie are my favourite interactions all up.
Omg, fk Jordan aha, Bernie can abort the baby if she wants to! I don't like Jordan now, but I loved her in the last chapter aha. Although it was kind to remove her memories (perhaps.) but just what's the catch there?
Harry is my favourite ever so I hope he wins! Also, I am hoping Draco dies too, but know that's really unlikely.
AKxx
A few things!
Ok, so with The Wizard-Born Muggle, it's a sequel to The Pureblood Squib, so might not make much sense at times if you haven't read the first installment. And! You honestly have no idea how happy and giddy I was to see that you reviewed my story. I have been a fan since I read your OC fics a while back, and to say I 'fangirled' ... well, I'll just it at that aha.
To your fic! I love love love love (!!!!!!) that Jordan is a woman! I really was expecting a guy, and freaked out when it was revealed that's she's a badass woman. Amazing moment. I haven't even finished reading the chapter yet! I had to stop at that moment and review.
Ok, i just read the rest and if you bring back Harry I may just drop dead. In a good way.
Such a plot twist! (a good one!)
I love Bernie btw. Go her!
AKxx
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