Reviews for Fairest CreaturesBy : Lomonaaeren |
I'm so glad I finally managed to find this again, and that it was finished! As I put when I first read it, this is funny and sweet and nicely developed. I like how Harry hates his fame and what a difference that makes to how he views being Veela. And Draco is so sweet!
The extra chapter is very lovely too. Awesome job! SP
SP777
Conclusion...
To be that independent on a individual, I honestly couldn't see myself doing that UNLESS I was born a Veela. Personally I think I have some willpower to stand on my own and not be dependent on someone else.
Anyway, nice to see Draco's side of things...also it would have been nice to touch on 'why' he wanted to be a transformed Veela tho', get more insight.
SP777
about the end...
This was a nice [sometimes lovey dovey] story, glad to see they had made progress.
Awesome :)
I like the way you put Draco's determination onto Harry at the beginning. Great story.
What a wonderful tale! Lovely! Loved every minute of it. Thank you for sharing!
SP777
about #34...
You know, it just occured to me, you've gotten quite good at writing Harry & Draco as mates, but what about doing a story as them as husbands, it shouldn't be any different just they wouldn't be...non-human. Ever thought of that, the whole marriage fiasco?
SP777
about 33..
Do you want to make that scene from Draco's POV a request for an Advent fic? Sure...
SP777
about #32...
To be honest, I would have loved to have seen this from Draco's POV...what he was feeling.
SP777
about #31..
I'm actually looking forward to when they CAN be apart! They remind me of a couple that's too lovey-dovey...we need more action from outside influences.
SP777
about #30..
That was nice drama there & a fitting punishment played out...right to the point.
SP777
about #29..
Well that's an interesting way of healing I like it. :-) I have to ask ever thought of doing a Veela story in the future where the wings can be vanished?
Now that was brilliant! Draco does a very thorough job of healing his mate and what a way to do it!
Where is the next chapter!!!!!????
I am going crazy here!!
Great job on the creature potray!!
This is fic is absolutely wonderful!!! Keep up the great work
SP777
about 28...
I was hoping for a bird fight, but it's all good. :-)
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