Reviews for The DareBy : Tassanaburrfoot |
Really enjoying the story. Can't wait to read more.
I know you said some are saying too much is going on here, but I am personally really enjoying all the twists and new information. This is one story I check for updates constantly as it is keeping my attention and interest so well. And I loved the scene here at the end between Draco and Hermione. That's so much like how I see their interactions in my mind. I can't wait to see what's next! :)
Wonderful as always!!! I eagerly await your next chapter.
I really like this story however, I need to point out that newts are taken in their 7th year, not their 6th year. Other than that, it's a great story.
unfortunately i'm so bored with this story.... i keep reading hoping for something to happen. its starting to really drag. too many plots, too little character development. I didnt even care about the rape-y/ abusive relationship between H/D. I just think you took on too much and just get bogged down... I dont know if i'll continue, i just hope you have some sort of outline or story line that youre following because it doesnt feel like it.
Thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, although the sex scenes are great in the preceding chapters, they aren't necessary in all......especially when you're trying to create a compelling story. I really liked how Hermione seems to have found her voice and backbone but I also get the feeling that Draco is trying to prove himself more trustworthy, although I don't doubt that he still has some underhanded tricks up his sleeve.
Hope you get your technical issues sorted out soon, as I do always look forward to your updates.
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