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By : TheMightyFlynn
  • From Jan on September 07, 2016

    Oh, I can't wait to see what Draco and Harry's showdown is gonna be like, please update chapter 34 soon.


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  • From ANON - on September 05, 2016

    I was on Harry's side, I thought Draco was going to do something stupid out of anger. Astoria's response surprised me, but made sense. I hope Draco isn't terribly anger with Harry, I hope he realizes or Astoria tells him the way Harry was raised impacted his response. 

    I will stop asking you to continue with this world. I didn't realize how many times I had said something.  

    Hestia 


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  • From Jan on September 01, 2016

    Love it! Please update chapter 33 soon😁


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  • From ANON - Hestia on August 29, 2016

    That surprised me yet again. How could Scorpius even think for a second that they wouldn't be in trouble? I'm mean sure they were trying to be nice, but they just up and left. It is really kind of sweet that they wanted to surprise Harry and Draco and it means they support the marriage. Oh and please tell Regulas' portrait will be destroyed, I mean how dare he try to get children to find his secret stash. I'm sincerely hoping that you can do more of this world when you finish this one because I just can't get enough. 

    Hestia 


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  • From ANON - Hestia on August 21, 2016

    You surprised me with the kids disappearing now. For some reason I thought Harry and Draco would get married and then deal with the boys. Now I'm thinking you'll solve the problem with the kids, marry them, and finish the story with the wedding. 

    I know my reviews are anonymous, but it says anon by Hestia. I don't understand why, but I'm guessing it has to do with not logging in. 

     


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  • From ANON - Hestia on August 14, 2016

    Are the boys going to do something at the wedding? I love how Harry and Draco get each other going. I like that you kept the intensity of their relationship going and how James went to talk to Draco. I really want the story to keep going and going, I dont want it to end after the wedding. Maybe Ginny could escape sometime after the wedding  and honeymoon and cause trouble. You've built a wonderful world. I look forward to everyone of your updates because there is always something great to read. 


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  • From ANON - Hestia on June 05, 2016
    Did one or more of the kids take the missing potions? I really love reading about your version of Harry and Draco and their family. I'm hoping there is quite a bit more to go because I really don't want it to end.
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  • From Jan on May 01, 2016
    😍😍😍😍😍😍Absolutely love Draco and Harry together! They're just to freaking adorable together!😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Please update chapter 16 soon.
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  • From Jan on April 27, 2016
    Quite happy indeed😁 they're too cute together! And I especially liked the Lucius and Lily bonding moment, I found it sweet, and adorable. Please update chapter 15 Soon.
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  • From Jan on April 19, 2016
    This last chapter was sweet, I like seeing Harry getting along with Lucius and Narcissa so well 😄 please update chapter 14 soon.
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  • From Jan on April 10, 2016
    Lol, I would truly like to see Harry try and hex Narcissa as she try's to draw out blood from him 😈 please update chapter 13 soon.
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  • From Jan on March 21, 2016
    Please update chapter 10 soon.
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  • From effie88 on March 20, 2016
    You write so well! Looking forward to more!
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  • From Jan on March 14, 2016
    Please update chapter 9 soon 😄
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  • From xxxsilverglitters on March 13, 2016
    I read all the 51 chapters of "19 Years and 5 Minutes Later" in 2 days and this sequel is giving me life. These are honestly the best I've ever read so far!! Thank you for writing them. xxx
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