Reviews for The Optimal BalanceBy : TheMightyFlynn |
Love!
I adore this series. So sweet. The beginning is intense but the way you bring them together is so wonderful. Love love LOVE it.
I think you ended at a good spot even though I want more. I do hope you continue past the one shot you have planned, but I realize inspiration has to strike. Anways, thanks for writing this one and hope to see some of your writing soon.
Hestia
Absolutely loved it, it was sweet, funny, caring, and not to mention exciting at the end! Love how Harry and Draco are so lovey dovey and kinky😉
I can't wait for the next one shot 😻
Aww, I love that they don't want to let go of each other. I wish I had what they have. I think that's what is so appealing is that it a wonderful relationship with problems and issues to overcome. I truly love how you write. I like when Draco opens up a bit so Harry can see what he is feeling. So now I will ask again for more, keep thke going, don't just stop. I trust that you have more to write about this version of Harry and Draco. I really want a story line with a pregnant Harry. It has to be Harry, not Draco.
Thanks for writing.
Hestia
Lol, poor Tori, she didn't get her dance, please update chapter 40 soon.
Just want you to know that I think this is a fantastic story. I think you're a very good and consistent writer. New to the site and this is the first story I've really gotten in to. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for your next update.
Trust is very important, it's nice that Draco opened up to Harry, especially before the wedding, I feel like somehow that made it even more special. Please update chapter 39 soon.
See, the kids had good intentions and a brilliant idea for a wedding gift😆 pleas update chapter 38 soon.
I didn't think it was korny. I actually liked it, I mean I read these things for the happily ever after so I want them to fix it. I also can imagine if this happened and I loved someone the way they love each other I'd go through with the wedding. It may be the stupid thing to do, but sometimes you just follow your heart.
Also, please continue the series! I'm thinking a Harry pregnancy would be a great read from your pov.
Hestia
Well look at Draco being all mature and knowing he needs to wait to talk. I read other reviews and I don't think Harry is being controlling or selfish, I think he is scared to death that Draco will leave or postpone the wedding. I think Harry's response was not okay, but his upbringing and being an auror allowed him to see the worst of people. I think he just thought Draco was so angry he was just reacting and not thinking. On the other hand Draco deserves to be insulated and angry, really angry. I'm hoping they can resolves this and still have that love and trust they had before.
I do really want you to continue with this world. What about Harry getting pregnant on accident somehow. I know others have done this, but I would love to read what you could do because you are Brilliant (yep with a capital B).
hestia
Oh, I feel for Harry, I hated having to wait til the next morning before fixing a problem, I couldn't sleep trough out the whole night, and the next day I would a have a major headache all day long. Please update chapter 35 soon.
My review before might have sounded harsh. I just want to say I do love the story, I just was a little bit rubbed wrong with Harry in this last chapter. It felt a bit...almost controlling? I hope it's just me. but when Harry said he didnt want Draco to take time to think things through, because he might want time, I felt concerned. There is nothing wrong with taking a bit more time in a relationship, they did rush a lot. I sort of feel like Harry is just being rather selfish. Pushing Draco to talk about things even though he's tired, drawing his wand on Draco, telling him he doesnt want him to think on it because he might want more time. It all comes across selfish and a bit controlling to me.
I am curious to see how this will be handled next chapter! Thanks for the update!
Sadness! I was hoping this chapter would help but it made me dislike Harry that much more LOL! I feel terrible for Draco. You can't claim to love and trust someone but be ready to tackle them with a wand drawn. I feel honestly like Harry is lying. Love isn't trust and if Harry trusts Draco it's only to be a parent when they're good and not bad because he didn't allow Draco to discipline. And kids can pick up on that and-even unconsciously-use it to their advantage to cause qualms in relationships.
Maybe it's because I'm a bit too familiar with step parent stuff yet I do feel Harry was not only wrong but completely disrespected Draco.
i wish he was packing to leave Harry.
I am on Dracos side and...im rather bothered by harry lol! I kind of want Draco to put Harry in place a bit. I see why Astoria was scared, I was too for Draco. Harry can have his sad past and all that goodness, but 2 days before his wedding he pulled his WAND out on his to-be.
I think if anything that spells SERIOUS issues in their relationship. Period. Harry thought Draco would hurt his son? And his response is to go on the offensive? That spells serious distrust. I feel bad for Draco, he didnt actually do anything wrong, and learned that his partner is willing to take him down. I would be very hurt. How sad.
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