Hello, vraiment excellent ^^ merci bcp c'était passionnant ^^ avec mes sentiments les meilleurs !

Fun. Enticing. Eye rolling dramatics. Such a fun premise. Sadenly sweet at the end. Just as alluring as The Quickening. Another guilty pleasure.

DS,

Beautiful last chapter. 

It was very touching, every time I think of Snape's past, I want to run to him and give him a hug. The release phrase was terrifyingly sad, it represented the darkest event of his life, no wonder he buried it so deeply. His soul-cleansing tears in Hermione's arms were needed for him to move on, free. It also showed how multi-faceted he is. So powerful, but so vulnerable; so strong and disciplined, but so sensitive and delicate -he is a perfection.

She chose him. I'm happy.

Thank you so much.

Fox xx

DS,

This chapter (7) was sooo funny, my eyes were watering and I nearly choked, but as I'm at work, I did NOT laugh out loud -you must admire my restraint :) I loved the "swearing part of her brain" hahaha -that part is uncommonly large in my own brain :-)

Now, for my favs: "Words delivered in splinters through her gritted teeth" -that sounds dangerous 

"Granger danger" -is funny and soo true, boys always said, that Hermione is scary

"Most of the forthcoming questions wouldn't be requiring answers, simply expressions of guilty remorse" hahaha somehow I can't imagine this -remorseful Snape! Ha!

"You're no longer qualified to remind anyone of anything" -Ouch, sharp Hermione

The section of Severus' explanation on why he wrote it is truly heart-gripping. I also forgot to tell you, that I really loved the snippets from Mr Boats.

"The comedy cunt" bit really cracked me up

"Moving pornographic shrine" -mmm nice interior desing idea

"Come- and cock-centric" -like most of my life

Emotional chapter, apart from usual hilariousness and hotness. For such a private person as Snape, it must have been so difficult to let someone into his mind. Especially object of his obsession... The ending made me feel very anxious. What the hell did she found in there? It must be bad for her to cry so much... 

Fox xx

DS,

Snape wrote it! WTF! Did he put the hex on then? Does he know the phrase? I didn't expect such a  twist in this chapter  (6). You are brilliant.  Hermione will be furious, I bet. What else will you come up with? 

The chapter was great,  you are wonderful with words. I loved: "simmering restraint" -delicious 

"Shiny magician cape waiting for BIG reveal" -snort inducing 

"Time for them to finally meet and exchange the details" -you made it sound like it's some business confidence hahaha, but exchanging bodily fluids instead of info. Great. 

"The steam blurred their fused bodies like an impressionist" -beautiful -the whole shower entering scene is beautiful. 

"Rigid column that had been eyeing her off jealously throughout his languid fingering" -god! 

"Impending nuclear reaction" -I want one of those...

"Marking her insides like a cave painting" -wow

The chapter was mouth-watering, pussy-clenching,  knicker-flooding, goosebump-raising and jealousy-inspiring.

And then WTF! Unexpected. Excellent. 

Fox xx 

DS, 

And another great chapter (5). You have a talent for comedy. Your sense of humour varies so much, it's witty and sarcastic, very clever,  sometimes dark, situations are unbelievable -you are a genius! 

The comparison of Cock Ness Monster to Crooks was so funny. 

The internal monologue on the taste of cocks and semen was hilarious! I'm still laughing as I write.  I hope it's not what I'm going to think about,  next time I have a cock in my face hahahaha

Hermione in her class gave him  an important hint, when she mentioned the Mesmer's voice... and of course, Severus not being dim, used it during potions class... with maximal result.  I wonder if it's actually possible to make a woman orgasm with voice only... his voice is definitely making me wet, hmmm... Have you ever heard of a real life case of this type?  I also wish more men were as good with words as he is. God I love this fic! 

Fox xx

DS,

Firstly, I need to tell you that your chapter titles are little masterpieces -love them.

So, I was wrong. hmmm. This chapter (4) was very funny, fabulously embarassing and knickers-wetting-hot, they got into some kind of action. The torpedo scene was brilliant and I loved her internal arguments with herself. Honestly, I'm laughing all the time, this story is a lot of fun.

I found many amusing bits:

1."waves of smirk" I can feel them too

2. "gift from a dildo fairy"  -I actually have one living under my pillow permanently (dildo -not fairy, sadly)

3. "labia-smeared wand" -I can see it in my mind 

4. She didn’t need to? AKA: he didn’t want her to. AKA: he wanted to listen to her get herself off. AKA: WTF? -the whole thing just great, unlady-like snorts through out.

Thanks 

Fox xx

DS,

Another great chapter  (3) I loved your check list, especially "hated woman" who "pretends not to look" hahaha. The whole basket idea was very funny. But then I really felt sorry for Severus. Bathroom scene started sexy, but then turned cruel and ended sad with a bit of tender. 

I imagine, that all this sexual frustration will have to be resolved at some point, but knowing you,  there is some waiting,  awkwardness and a bit of cringing to be done first. Am I right? 

Fox xx 

DS,

This is positively naughty :-D I especially enjoyed Nessy and Head of Slither In. Seriously, it got me wet and  grinning, not a common combination for me. Not recently anyway...

So poor thing was obsessed for years... awww, but don't worry Severus, soon,  hopefully soon... Nessy will find its loch...

Fox xx

DS,

Great beginning. The story is so different from The Quickenning, which I just finished.  Again, I have to say, that I love your sense of humour.  The story is hilarious and the situation is so exciting, but I predict awkward... I mean peeing, washing and other things...

I can't wait!

Fox xx