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Reviews for The Book that Binds *COMPLETE*

By : Desert_Sea
  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 13, 2016
    Brava!!!!! I absolutely loved every word of that final (boo hoo hoo) chapter. I loved where you went with it and I was touched by his vulnerability. I am so glad she handled it well and I like to think they never got to brew any of the potions because they never needed to. :-) Thank you! I look forward to more from you very soon. HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Missus_G on February 13, 2016
    Oh, I loved this!!! Epilogue?! Pretty please!!!
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  • From ANON - lovey_reader on February 13, 2016
    Omg! You are brilliant. I almost cried. That was beautiful. "I trust you" as the release phrase was incredible. That moved me.
    "Professor of fucking", loved it.
    Oh I can't believe it's over. I am always so sad when I see that dreaded word...Complete. 'sighs'. That was too short but oh so lovely. I can't wait for the next one. You know I am one of your biggest fans always. Chop. Chop. I am hungry for more. :) Until next time...
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  • From ANON - Talented_Mrs_Lupin on February 13, 2016
    I liked the chapter. Can't wait to read another story and I feel better that he wasn't just a pervert!!
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  • From ANON - Robin on February 12, 2016
    I laughed so hard at the start and then sobered quickly at his revelation.
    And he really did have an active mind, deary me! I wonder what Hermione will make of it.
    And now a Cliffy ... really? *pout* You're soooooo mean.
    ...
    Of course not - please keep writing. I enjoy this story so much
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  • From OracleObscured on February 11, 2016
    Great chapter. I like the blending of serious and sarcastic.
    furphies—I had to look this up. And then add it to my word notebook.
    "Her inner monologue was throwing up a fruit salad of furphies..."—I loved this even more once I knew what furphies meant.
    "The words were delivered in splinters through her gritted teeth."—Splinters. That's great.
    "...something more to present than ham-handed silence on a wilted bed of awkwardness."—I love how you created imagery for something that isn't physical.
    "He was in ‘Granger danger’ again..."—This just amused me. Rhyming makes me happy. (Which is probably why I'm always so excited to see what chapter name you came up with.)
    "Adam’s apple jousting away the jabbing vinewood, he poured out a sigh that seemed to have been dredged up from the soles of his feet."—I like this whole sentence, but I love the jousting.
    "...on the verge of skewering his windpipe..."— Again, you picked the perfect word.
    "He raised an accusing eyebrow and Hermione only just stopped herself from impaling it with her wand."—This made me laugh. I'm not violent by nature, but there are those moments when anger ignites your imagination.
    "...like some comedy cunt that instantly inflated upon his touch."—Hahahaha! This is great. I can't stop picturing him unsuspectingly pulling her ripcord and her inflatable pussy knocking him out with its sudden expansion.
    "Perhaps a clean and jerk onto his shoulders? Or maybe ‘the snatch’ would be more appropriate."—Hahahahaha! Sounds like the move that would send me to the chiropractor for a month.
    "...moving pornographic shrine..."—Great description.
    I loved the entire mind search scene. It's a little bit dirty, and a little bit vulnerable. A little bit funny and a little bit serious. I can't wait to see what happens.
    Just as a side note, my fantasies are also cock centric. I could spend an entire day getting off in Snape's head.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on February 11, 2016
    Poor Severus! I had no no idea he would end up that mortified. I know Hermione has a right to be squicked out that he was watching her all that time, even if I am sure most of the earlier years were not sexual, I still hope she isn't too hard on him. I think he is kicking himself enough for both of them right now. He needs a hug. :-( I also am a tad worried about what this word will be, since it upset her so much. EEK! Thanks again, hon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Missus_G on February 11, 2016
    Oh, my! What did she see? I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - LeWyKi on February 11, 2016
    Hi there, thanks, I like to be helpful (and if possible nor the Lady-Catherine-de-Bourgh-kind) and thanks for answering so many of my questions :)
    Also I wonder, what exactly she found now. Knowing you that will be another surprise. I thought the release phrase would be something related to either love or forgiveness - considering his state of mind at the time, but as that is a logical thought, I'm certain, Snape would have tried that already. So I am left to wait for your take on it.
    Also, was he somehow obliviatet/did obliviate himself of the knowledge? - unlikely, if she could find it via Legilimency. What would be left are protective mechanisms of the mind to avert/lessen trauma and such. Because she's right - Snape is not one to naturally forget something like a password without means of regaining it.
    I really liked the whole discussion and Hermione's "no touching until this one's solved" attitude was amusing. Nothing like sex as a motivator to accomplish your goals...
    On to the thing that puzzled me in this chapter: the timeline. I must clarify beforehand, that I do like math, rather a lot. As such, I usually try to get things to add up. Assuming you are going with canon at least when it comes to birthdates and major events, Snape was born in 1960, graduated from Hogwarts in 1978, Hermione, like Harry, born in 1980, Voldemort defeated for the first time in 1981, and the second time in 1998 and from then on it gets confusing. She either redid her 7th year or just got her NEWTs for by default at the ent of the war - that would make her graduate from Hogwarts in 1998 or 1999. Next comes Teacher's College, which according to your story lasted for 3 years at least (if she learned Legilimency in her final years, there must have been at least one first year). I think, the usual amount of time would be 5 years, but let us assume 3 years after 1998. That takes us to 2001, likely later, that the story takes place. Her first year of actual teaching.
    Snape, on the other hand says, he wrote the book at 28 (1988) which was 12 years ago, bringing us to 2000 as the year the story takes place. Well and that leaves me with at least one year of confusion...Nevermind though, that just came to mind today, when reading the new chapter.
    So now, that I have burdend you with all that nonsense (this is a fanfiction of another fictional story, after all), hopefully I've given you a little laugh for the day.
    Until the next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - D on February 11, 2016
    Very compelling. The characters are well written and believable. Extremely enjoying read.
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  • From ANON - cullens_darlin on February 11, 2016
    Ohhhh so sweet
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  • From Talented_Mrs_Lupin on February 11, 2016
    Well, that is a very private place to be. I think it's horrible to think that he was looking at her when she was teenager however I think that it makes it a bit more believable than to think that magically all the feelings just appeared when she came back as a professor. I tend to think that with her as a professor he would able to be attracted to her intellect as well as her body...still NOT COOL to think he was looking (and fantasizing?) about her when she was a child. Anyway, awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next update so PLEASE don't make me wait too long.
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  • From ANON - lovey_reader on February 11, 2016
    I'm glad you liked that. :)
    I love it. He forgot?! What the?! That's so awesome. That happens to me all the time. I mean who hasn't had that happen to them. You forget the simplest thing and it takes forever to remember. That was BRILLIANT.
    Oh man, "come and clock centric" , that's awesome.
    A tunnel of pornography starring Hermione that's fantastic.
    But you naughty, naughty woman. How could you leave me with a cliffy? Argh. I am so intrigued by what that release phrase might be. I bet it's going to be great. I don't know what I a looking forward for most, their conversation about what she saw or the release phrase? Either way it's going to be epic!!! I can't wait!!!
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  • From ANON - Mary on February 11, 2016
    Fantastic story, love the inside monologues from Hermione. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From OracleObscured on February 08, 2016
    This was a very sensual chapter. And it ended on a more intimate note. Nice combination.
    "...although from now on it was definitely also going to be her masturbation fantasy" —Me too.
    basketfully—This was too perfect...and hilarious.
    "...she began to wonder how big his bag was and how many other tricks it contained."—It's a bag of epic proportions. Now I'm snorting too much.
    "Leaning in to her"—Into should probably be one word
    "...his cool exhalations sliding over her upper lip."—Great tactile description.
    "...barrier of frantic tension separating them"—Loved this.
    "She could feel her pulse ticking through her bottom lip, exquisitely engorged in preparation for union, but left agonizingly bereft."—Beautiful.
    "Was there any such thing as a clit tease?"—Snort. Most definitely.
    "...the hand against her chest was operating her like a bellows."—This was excellent.
    The entire kiss scene was wonderfully sensual.
    "...pressure of that firm muscular saddle grinding against her swollen pussy"—I might have just enjoyed this because I like humping things, but it could have also been because of the word saddle, which I think is a perfect visual.
    Loved the transition from kissing to finger sucking. Yummy.
    "Like an animal pinned out on a dissection board—he had one of her hands trapped by the book, his fingers securely hooked into her mouth, and a knee wedged against her pussy, exposing her so that he could play with her as he wished. And she loved it."—I liked both the visual of this and the exposure it depicts
    "...distinct anvil shape"—Hahaha! Great.
    "...shiny magician’s cape." Ta-da! Love the image.
    majestically—Word notebook. Majestic cock is my favorite kind of cock.
    "...about as erotic as Filch in a G-string."—Hahahahaha! Great comparison.
    "sex action pose"—Sex Action Snape - Take down his trousers and set Nessy free. Hours of fun for you and your friends. Silk boxers and sex books sold separately.
    "...nipple-garnished breast had been the right one"—Loved this.
    "..time for them to finally meet and exchange details."—This was funny, but also clever.
    "When he introduced a third finger, she sucked the air from his lungs with a rapid intake of breath."—She sucked the air from his lungs is lovely. Very real and visceral.
    "Hermione was being reamed into a stated of incoherent oblivion." —I liked this description (and I think you mean state).
    "Droplets of water clung to his long eyelashes and his almost pained expression and breath bursting through parted lips, told her he wasn’t far off. She glanced down at his red, pistoning cock as it flashed in and out of her pussy and her cunt clenched reflexively."—This was a buffet of sensual details.
    "...while her pussy gulped..."—Brilliant.
    "...marking her insides like a cave painting."—Loved this comparison.
    "...the vast majority of scrubbing had occurred between her thighs."—Snort. Been there.
    Loved the lines from the book; they were freaking gorgeous.
    And you've let the cat out of the bag. How exciting. Can't wait to see where you go next.
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