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Reviews for Balaur

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  • From Bookish0926 on July 02, 2019

    Another amazing story! 😍


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  • From ANON - RevDorothyL on October 21, 2016

    Wow!  Complex and full of empathy and insight for children caught up in wars they never should have had to fight.  Well done!


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  • From inverclacky on August 14, 2016

    Hi. Can I just begin by saying that this was a wonderfully written and thought out story. You showed the characters in a way that I always believed they would turn out. I would like to point something out though that is in no way intended to be a critisism, more a personal opinion. I understand you wishing to come across as eloquent, (no-one wants to sound as though an 8 year old could have done better) however it became increasingly difficult to read. Sentances grew complicated as I grew frustrated at figuring out what was being said and by whom. What began as a unique and thoroughly entertaining tale ended up with me feeling really rather stupid. I don't know if you still read these reviews but I would like to end it by saying that despite my opinions on the structure I thank you for breathing new life into old characters and for your creativity.


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  • From ANON - Anon on April 05, 2016
    wonderful :) i enjoyed every moment
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  • From madmapper82 on April 03, 2016
    So glad to see this updated. Where are you moving your publishing? I want to be sure so I can keep following.
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  • From madmapper82 on March 26, 2016
    This story just keeps getting better! So glad you decided to continue it.
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  • From ANON - Ash on March 11, 2016
    Cute story, although the time line was a bit funky.
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  • From ANON - DaFossil on March 06, 2016
    I liked the story very much, a wonderful treat when we got back from our anniversary celebration in Branson, MO.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 04, 2016
    I just saw on your profile, when I went there to read more of your stories, that you'll be leaving AFF. I hope you'll consider posting on "Archive Of Our Own" (aka AO3) for your next works. I am just a reader, not a writer, of fanfics but writers' comments suggest it's a good format to use. Please let us know, somehow, where you land and whether your author name will be the same. Best wishes from a fan of yours.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 04, 2016
    A very satisfying ending. Too many Dramione stories end with a wedding; a graduation ceremony was better suited to these circumstances. This chapter did address my concerns about Ron. I was relieved that he did receive some penalty as well as the treatment he needed. Great story. I would love to read a sequel in which we learn more about Balaur's special magical gifts and about the next Malfoy to be born. Thanks for a delightful tale.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 04, 2016
    I don't think I've ever read a fanfic that did a thorough job of explaining the post-war magical economy. Well done. I am surprised that Ron wasn't arrested for having sent a Disintegration curse at Hermione. Wouldn't that be attempted magical assault? Did Harry cover for him again? I think he should have had some legal penalty for his malicious attack and not have been allowed to continue any sort of quidditch career.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 04, 2016
    Hermione is so confused. I hope her head and her heart and her PTSD manage to settle and make sense of things for her soon. Your writing reveals good insight into what she is experiencing.
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  • From ANON - Victoria on March 04, 2016
    Your authors' notes and responses to reviews are wonderful to read. You seem to put a lot of thought into your replies and, when some reviewer needs a swift kick, your sarcasm and wit assure a delightful riposte. ....It was another great chapter to read. Like you, I see few redeeming qualities in Ron and find your depiction of his character to be spot on. I'm pleased that Harry may finally see how shallow and self-centered his old friend truly is. Luna's clairvoyance was just the surprising insight Draco needed. Now, on to the birth. Very exciting.
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 02, 2016
    Congratulations on another captivating story! I am glad "all's well that ends well." :-) I am not happy she got pregnant again. I would have ripped out my own organs before I let all that crap happen again. lol I look forward to your next story. Thanks again, HG4eva
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on March 01, 2016
    Wow! You certainly didn't go fluffy on this. Realism and reality, huh? I didn't know where you were going with this story when it started, but I would never have seen all of this coming. I am glad to know people are healing from their horrors, but saddened to think everyone is so burdened and sad. I guess you're not a Ron fan, huh? lol I hope Bali is happy at least. Thank you again, HG4eva
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