Reviews for Freedom Bound in ChainsBy : TaintedSensibly |
So, I love these boys. I just want to hug them, tell them everything will be ok and keep them safe. I really hope you have not only Liam but both Jess and Dray meet the boys in England. I think you have it planned or at least I hope) that either Jess or Dray will ask Liam about the boys alone. Then the opposite girl will ask her what she found out (so the spell will not affect her). Then the one who spoke with Liam will be told to talk him into going to England to look for them. I can't wait for more!! And Draco's mindscape!! Wow. I loved it. Like a warrior or a preditor, it's perfect for him! Can't wait to see what you come up with next! I'm curious to see what Harry's mind will be like. Will it be the complete opposite of Draco's? Where his is a peaceful grove but in the middle is a fierce protector?
Omg!! So I usually do not read a story prior to it being completed, because I get so anxious for the next chapter. However, sometimes when I see a new story and am browsing through to see if I would like it, I get dragged in. That's what happened here. It is rare. But sometime when the story is so good, even though I try to just skim it sucks me in. You sucked me in. This story is fantastic. I started out skimming. Then found I was reading more than skimming. It is at the point now where I am trying to tell myself to not read anymore til it's done. But I can't help but check everyday for any update. And squeal when it's there! I think I will cave and go back and read it all through then wait for new chapters lol. I just can't wait to see what you do with this. I'm praying you have Liam meet them in England and screw the danger to him. And I wait with bated breath to see how the Malfoys will react to not only knowing there son is alive but what he's like and that he is already bonded to Harry Potter of all people! Will they become another protective force in the boys lives? Will they welcome Harry with open arms? I wait in suspense. Keep up the wonderful work and know I am excited for each and every chapter.
I don't know how they expect them to change Draco that drastically but as long as Harry and Draco are together still and they don't try to separate them then I'm good.
I love that they got a mind healer for Harry. Don't like the reaction they receive to his name from the girl in California. I think Draco did the right thing by taking him out and reassuring their feelings first thing. So glad Remus is going to keep them for a while. They don't need Dumbledore manipulation at all. Wonder when they are going to figure out the latest he is Draco Malloy. Not Black. Can't wait to read more.
Loving this fic and can't wait to read more even thought all the things the boys are going through make me want to cry.
Wow!!!
Oooo... I cried so hard reading this chapter. Huhuhu. Liam!!! I feel for you. Will Draco n Harry meet him again? Keep up the good work!
-kyoko21
I'm tempted to stop reading here because it ended so happily for them
They need Liam. That is so not right. At least Remus now knows the nature of their relationship. Can't wait to see what happens next.
And they were the demons? Gotta love hypocritical assholes who use religion to cover torture and sadism. So glad they all got out. Maybe the boys don't have to lose Liam.. Can't wait for more.
Amazing story, just may be deemed gory but the writing fits with the story development.
Can't wait to see how Harry and Draco and ?Liam deal now they have been rescued to the magical world.
Hope Liam will be able to stay with them as I do believe he can be of great support.
Keep posting and I'll definitely keep reading
intense... I just couldnt stop reading it. This story is an oddity that both delights and scares me. I cannot wait to see what comes next. Keep up the great work.
I really hope Remus won't do anything stupid like try and separate them and I hope everything goes well for them and noone hurts them or Liam. Informative chapter can't wait for the next one.
I am so sad. I wish they could take Liam with them. I think he still needs them. Hope Remus is up to the challenge of taking care of them. The last thing they need is Dumbledore getting ahold of them. Maybe Lucious and Narcissa would be better.
Wow... just wow... I basically power-read through all 20 chapters starting last night around midnight, finally crashing around 5am, then getting up and reading the rest! That will teach me to start a new story just before bed!
This story is really great and I love the emotional bonding and psycology that has been included. I will admit, I was really sorry to see Brendon killed, though, since I felt there was so much potential there since he was the one who really understood Draco!
If there was one thing I would like to see improved, it's Harry's development and growth. Draco has grown and change a lot since the story started, and while I love the D/s dynamic between Draco and Harry, I feel like Harry ends up being more of an extention of Draco rather than a whole person on his own. It would be nice to see him grow into his own person with his own likes and wants and motivations that sometimes might be seperate or opposite of what Draco wants and how the boys handle that.
Anyways, that being said, I still think this is an awesome and very well written story and am anxious to see where it goes. I definitely want to see the pair discover the wizarding world and meet Draco's family, and yet am torn because Liam has been so good for the boys, I'd hate to see him removed from their lives!
I look forward to the next chapter! :D
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