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Reviews for Freedom Bound in Chains

By : TaintedSensibly
  • From Pathagen on March 20, 2018

    This was actually so good i read all current 85 chapters nonstop over 2 days 

    Nearly killed my eyes but it was worth it


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  • From Pathagen on March 20, 2018

    I have read literally thousands of fanfictions both here and on fanfiction.

    Very rarely do i find stories as enticing and well written as this

    All i can say is keep it coming!!!

    Ps. ignore anyone who rants and raves about the content of the story as it does actually add to the story and is not just there for the sake of it

     

    More please!!!


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  • From myperversities on March 18, 2018

    Wow! Narcissa gave her sister the access!! I never would have guessed that! I thought she just had a natural affinity for them or something. Poor Narcissa though, trying to be nice to her sister when she’s young and it backfired so bad. Now Lucius is so mad at her. 

     

    And holy cow with their father being alive!! I don’t think I have ever read a story where he’s alive. I actually don’t know much about him. Lol. Walburga is such a strong personality ( and the only one with a screaming portrait on the wall) I guess it never left time to think that there was a Mr. Black at some point!! And why is he on the run? Was he involved with the dark lord too?

     

    Wonderful chapter. Can’t wait for more. 


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  • From myperversities on March 05, 2018

    I loved Harry’s new outfit!!!! Omg Draco is going to drool when he can appreciate it!! I love that they are blessed by their gods, even the ‘dark and deadly’ ones. I’m also very glad it seems that Draco will overcome the mind altering that Voldemort did to him soon. 

    That was quite the twist with Bella being a virgin still even after marriage just waiting for Tom!  And instead of dying like Giny almost did, she’s pregnant!!

    Can’t wait for what comes next! 


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  • From vampiremom on March 05, 2018

    Best chapter I've read yet.  Love this story to begin with but yeah best chapter so far.


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  • From myperversities on February 03, 2018

    Wow!! That scene at the start... totally hot. This chapter was very suspenseful. I couldn’t put it down!! Now will Draco let his parents help? That’s the question. Can’t wait for more. And I hope life gets a little easier for you. I know sometimes it can kick you in the butt. 


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  • From myperversities on January 08, 2018

    Wow!! That was a shock! I did not expect Draco to seek out Dumbledore of all people! But somehow it worked. I guess because it was more like a threat than a request for help lol. 

     

    Aww and now he’s got even more people finding out the truth of his past but instead of turning away they are more determined to help. 

     

    Very well done. 


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  • From chibimina on December 31, 2017

    wow finally caught up with this. can wait for more.


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  • From myperversities on December 29, 2017

    Omg his episode was  like his beast coming out!!! 

     

    I liked this chapter. I feel like it’s picking up speed and we’re barreling towards the next catastrophe. 

     

    I love the merry band the boys have accumulated. 

     

    I dont understand why Draco doesn’t owl his dad. I feel like he could help even somewhat with a mind magic issue. I know he likes to do things himself but if he knows that Harry’s in danger if he can’t break the magic I feel like he’d do it.

     

    Anyways great job again. 


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  • From myperversities on December 07, 2017

    Ahh it finally happened!!! Harry had another breakdown. I thought it would happen soon. Poor boys got so much on his plate it could only be just a matter of time. He was doing so much better too!! I’m was almost as if he was normal. But I think that’s when the cracks start to show. For what Harry’s been though I think it would be a long and arduous journey back to sanity. And the path would be fraught with stumbling blacks and trip wire. 

     

    So glad to see the suspense pick up. I could feel the urgency in this chapter  

     

    I also thought it was interesting how Harry saw from Voldemort’s POV when attacking the unicorn. Especially since Harry would never do that on his own he really felt the despair and atrocity of the deed the way it was meant to be, since killing a unicorn stains your soul. 

     

    Was another great chapter. Can’t wait for more. 


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  • From Dedicated_Reader on November 05, 2017

    Again I must say, I love this story! It's become one of the stories I contemplate when I have free time. Your pacing is something I've been concerned with. If you keep up the everyday in detail pace you've been doing, the story will take forever for you to tell. However, the detail you provide is important. This chapter was lovely. We got the info we needed in a fluid form, but time has been passing. I can't wait to read more!


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  • From myperversities on November 05, 2017

    I don't mind if you speed it up a bit. I think there is a happy medium where you could have some time gaps and just gloss over some things that happened and spend more time and detail on the big things. 

    I'm curious is Snape will tell the Malfoys himself about what has happened. I've never known whether Dumbledore is good or bad  he fits both so well because of his manipulations and his denial of knowledge about situations I feel he Knew more about. Especially because they include children. 

     

    Im shocked Bella got out of her room. And of course she would find the diary. I feel it made perfect sense that she had that connection with the diary. It's intrigued me where you will go with this plot twist. 

     

    I must admit I'm hoping Draco or both Harry and Draco will be able to break the mind control and protect themselves from future attacks. Then they don't have to deal with more manipulative adults but I'm torn because I don't want Dumbledore to be right in saying to leave the situation alone and by ignoring it it will fix itself. 

     

    I live in suspense til you post again. 


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  • From ClaireR89 on October 14, 2017

    My only real issue with this story. Is that for 6 year olds they are way too intelligent and have in my opinion an incredibly unrealistic vocabulary and thought process 


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  • From myperversities on October 09, 2017

    Poor Draco, even Harry's magic couldn't fix the mind fuck Quirrell did on him. Hopefully Harry can convince him it was Quirrell they were watching not Snape. 

     

    I loved the werewolf scene!! That was such a rush! And they now have a loyal we're on their side not only in human form but in wolf too!   


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  • From myperversities on October 01, 2017

     And the plot thickens.  Things are heating up again people! Although poor Draco  somehow had his mind breached ! I Feel like it's just one more violation for the poor boy and now he suspects Snape!!!!  Holy plot twist Batman!!


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