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Reviews for Freedom Bound in Chains

By : TaintedSensibly
  • From ANON - My_perversities on January 09, 2017

    Whooo! Snape's the occlumens!! Yay! A question I have is would Draco have a problem with people hugging Harry? Or is it just Narcissa's perception that makes her think that? Also, isn't the Zabini family neutral as well? Just thought I'd bring it up since I didn't see them in the list and Blaise is in the boys year. And, if Harry being with the Malfoy's opened doors, why would it be seen as rude to invite the light families since Harry's family was light? I was just curious and pondering these questions so thought I'd put them out there. I'm sure they will be answered in future chapters anyways as you are very good with bringing everything together and tying up loose ends. This was a great chapter and set up for wonderful things to come I'm sure of it. 


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  • From ANON - My_perversities on January 02, 2017

    They finally made it to the Tonk's!  And the contrast between them and the Malfoy's is made even more clear with their humble but cozy abode! I loved how Dora worked her way into the boys confidence and trust. I was also glad they were willing to let Remus into their daily lives, although I was shocked they didn't know he was a werewolf. I guess I just assumed everyone knew so this was a new and interesting take on his interactions with others. I find it kind of sad that the Malfoys want to be parents so bad but because of their pure blood pompous nonsense they ruin that. Yet with Andromeda it comes so easy since she is more laid back. Well another wonderful chapter that is helping to progress this story. Can't  wait to see hogworts!! Everyone keeps saying Harry will be Hufflepuff and Draco Slytherin, but I can't see it. Yes I understand Harry personality wise may fit there, however as soon as he understands Draco will live in elsewhere from him if they are in different houses I feel he'll tell the sorting hat to put him with Draco. I'll lay in wait to see where you take this piece of artwork. 


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  • From ANON - Dymon Cheeks on January 02, 2017

    Wow, I love Andie and Tonks and Remus. Why can't they just live with them full time? Loving this can't wait for more.


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  • From ANON - Luna on December 25, 2016

    I am an awful reader for not reviewing after every chapter, but I wanted to let you know how powerful your story is. There will always be chapters that are more explain-ie than others. And I think explaining how the link between Harry and Draco came to be was very important. Don't be down on yourself. Depression is a hard thing to overcome, I know I struggle with it as well, and it always seems to return... Know that I and others check your story religiously for your weekly updates. It is one of the highlights of my week. 

    All the best,

    Luna


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  • From ANON - My_perversities on December 25, 2016

    Great job adding in the new movie term!! I'm so glad Harry's tattoo moves!!! So the secret of Voldemorts connection is revealed. Don't you dare put yourself down! I think your scenes are very descriptive!! I can see the whole scene in my head playing out as I read. I love this story and all you've done so far. 


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  • From ANON - LastSquibStanding on December 24, 2016

    Hi there,

    I'd just like to say how much I am enjoying this story! I'm sorry to hear that you've been depressed, but I assure you that it hasn't affected your writing in the least! Don't worry about pushing yourself too hard though xx 

    Hugs,

    LastSquibStanding 


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  • From ANON - My_perversities on December 16, 2016

    ooooo tattoo!! And a dragon too!! Just perfect. I loved the description of the green river guiding and leading the gold. But I feel like the green is Harry and the gold is Draco. Since the gold is the untamed, destructive force and the green is healing. But then Voldy is attached to the gold which seems to be Harry in that case. A little confusing but wonderfully descriptive and vivid. Now Dobbys in on how their relationship is. 


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  • From ANON - Dymon Cheeks on December 16, 2016

    Love it!!


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  • From ANON - Vampiremom1221 on December 09, 2016

    I love the choice of Pandora Lovegood.  She is perfect.  It would be great if she could be saved.  Luna would be so happy if she did.  Personally I think Lucious is a sick.  Wait until Draco finds out that he hit Narcissa.  Luscious is going to lose them all.  Can't wait to find out what Pandora finds.


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  • From ANON - My_perversities on December 09, 2016

     OMG! I absolutely love Pandora lovegood as the core specialist. I feel like she would be perfect for the role  and she comes off as very trustworthy. I was slightly shocked that Lucius was so vicious with Narcissa. He came off as so loving and devoted and carino of her before. So it seems like a bit of a Grove reversal. But I could totally see it happening since he is a bit of a loose cannon. I was glad to see you mention Liam,  and the girls feels like they're a little bit back in the story. You left this one on a bit of a cliffhanger so I'm even more eager to see what you come up with next. 


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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on December 09, 2016

    I think Pandora will make an incredible core specialist - it explains some of Luna's other worldliness written in the original stories.

    Lucius is afraid but I think he has interpreted the boys souls and inner personalities wrong - it appears that Harry calms Draco's monster where as Lucius seems to think it is Harry that harbours the monster. He may be difficult to write but the tone is right.

    I don't think the boys will appreciate Lucius hitting Narcissa - Harry may heal any damage and Draco will react strongly against Lucius.


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  • From ANON - Dymon Cheeks on December 08, 2016

    Loving this. I hope Lucius get's that stick out his butt or he will lose Draco, but I'm kinda hoping he does because I hate Lucius in this but at least Narcissa is kind. I really hope the boys put him in his place. I also really like the magical specialist. Can't wait for more. Keep up amazing work.


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  • From ANON - My_perversities on December 03, 2016

    Snape!! It's Snape!! I just know it ;)   Well another wonderful chapter and now the Malfoys somewhat understand the complexity of Dracos mind and the horror there (evil smirk). 


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  • From ANON - Melissa on November 28, 2016

    Hi!

     

    I've spent the last couple of days catching up on your amazing story, and can't wait for the next installment.  I can't wait to see what happens and really appreciate the detail and thought you've put into very chapter. I just wanted to know that I love your story and thank you for sharing it.


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  • From ANON - on November 26, 2016

    Great chapter! Can't wait to see what's going to happen with the boys next, wonder who's going to assert their dominance! Glad to see Harry and Draco are back in character. 


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