Reviews for A Naughty Witch's Guide to Sexual PleasureBy : OracleObscured |
I loved this saucy little story. I realized towards the end that I've read it before. Well worth the re-read!
I loved it very much. Thank you.
This was exceptionally well-written. Not the sexual parts so much as the descriptions and nuances of the characters. Those parts were my favorite. Like the "most charming smile" and "reformed" Lucius Malfoy. And how he almost spit out his wine. Excellent.
My Dear Oracle,
This story is so different from all the other ones, I had pleaseure to read from you. Severus and Lucius' interactions are so funny. Oracle, I believe only you can come up with such delicious, hot and laugh-wringing dialogues.
I loved how the story started, progressed and ended -the twist being an absolute cherry on the top! I'm totally sated -it was a perfection. I honestly wish, I could execute my fantasies with such a straight face -that's the level of perversion I'm aiming at!
There is a lot of favorite moments and sentences, for example: "Age improves flavor"??? HA! If only... trust me I've tried!
And all the talk about "weather" -so funny. And at last I know, what Lord Malfoy does as a job (apart from being a Lord, but obviously not a gentleman) -he's a professional undresser! He must be very good at it...mmmm
Another one: "tits pointing to heaven" and then "praying for an orgasm" -that's what I do too -hahahaha. Ohh my god...
For a someone, who doesn't make any money from all this writing, you are taking it to a painfully professional standard. I'm grateful -it reads wonderfully and with pleasure, in all it's wet glory.
Thank you so much, I'll be waiting for your next chapter story. Please hurry.
Your Fox xx
P.S.
Did I tell you I love you?
I do. xx
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