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Reviews for Summer at the Grangers

By : Daimah
  • From LadisWasherum on May 01, 2017

    Please continue ASAP, you've literally left off on a cliffhanger

     


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  • From DawnRinger on February 19, 2017

    I'm trying to ignore the spelling and grammar errors, as there really aren't that many, but it's getting difficult. I got to the part where Hermione whipped the shaving cream, instead of wiping it, and I couldn't finish the chapter without writing this review. I don't know if you have a beta reader or not. If you do, you need a better one (or to listen to the one you have), and if you don't have one, you need to get one.

    I also didn't like your statement last chapter regarding female masturbation being all about the vagina. Uh, no. This statement isn't completely wrong, but is incredibly inaccurate. It really depends on the woman. Yes, some women require more vaginal stimulation, while others, like myself, rely almost solely on clitoral. Please don't make general statements about women without doing a bit of research first.


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  • From SpeckyClarke on January 24, 2017

    Further to my review, please inform me of updates.


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  • From SpeckyClarke on January 24, 2017

    I left a review on this excellent story but only found out after that I could not indicate That I want notice of updates.  Please notify me when the time comes.


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  • From SpeckyClarke on January 24, 2017

    A really great story and very well written.  SISTERS, exciting.


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  • From Cateagle on August 23, 2016

    I just caught this story here and I have to say I find it quite hot.  I'm definitely looking forward to further chapters and seeing what else they can get into.


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  • From ANON - on July 16, 2016

    Loving the story. Can't wait to see where you go from here.


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  • From ANON - on July 12, 2016

    LOVE! more please!


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  • From ANON - on July 10, 2016

    This was a great read. I just wish it didn't stop so abruptly. Hopefully you finish your writing about the growing relationship between Harry, Hermione, and her sister.


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  • From ANON - on July 04, 2016

    please update soon I love your story


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  • From ANON - DesertSandBox on June 09, 2016
    so to be honest i wouldnt mind seeing hermione getting pregnant maybe her older sister also let harry get started on rebuilding the potter family.
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  • From YukiKim on June 09, 2016
    Wwhhhooo getting interesting...
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  • From YukiKim on June 05, 2016
    i dont how many times i read this since the start of the summer, it is soooo god!! please keep updates! its getting so good!this is like my 20th time reding since Summer vacation began
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  • From ursus on June 01, 2016
    I think you should consider having Julie secretly record everything on Jane's handy and some polyjuice fun (Hermione brewed it once so she could do it again or has some stashed). Jane could be an interesting in magic and a voyer, who brews potions with Her daughters' help or she could drink a potion by mistake, turn into Hermione and use the situation to pouch Harry. Anyway, it would be good if all of the Grangers were well read and knew much about what's magic capable of.
    At this point you could easily go for mother-daughters conspiration to have as much fun with magic as is possible.
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  • From Joe_Rogue on May 31, 2016
    Nice flow and excellent story telling.
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