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Reviews for The Unbreakable Bond

By : Alcoholic_Rootbeer
  • From Tnteacups on July 31, 2017

    I loved it, and pretty sure it proves I'm fucked up, cause I did like the end. :|


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  • From Deanna_Silver on January 19, 2017

    Wow. That was amazing. I loved every word of it! I loved the way it ended too. You can really write! I'm impressed! The quality of your writing is miles above a lot that I have read. This is the first story of yours that I have read and I can't wait to dive into another. Thanks!


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  • From MotekElm on December 17, 2016

    Very dark. Disturbing


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  • From Dramionefan on May 26, 2016
    omg, i know i am not suppose to even like it, but i fucking loved it so so much, like seriously, it turned me on, i enjoyed it so so much, its one of my top favorite stories, even as a one-off...
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  • From ANON - Saar on May 18, 2016
    I loved this, including the ending. Some may be annoyed but I love Draco/hermione too much XD Well done!
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  • From Dragon_Maiden on May 18, 2016
    I enjoyed this piece. Both the dark surrender and the ending. Very lovely I enjoyed your representation of the characters.
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  • From dweek on May 12, 2016
    So I noticed your Author's Note and I thought I would help out by clearing up our confusion. Stockholm syndrome is feelings of trust or affection felt in certain cases of kidnapping or hostage-taking by a victim toward a captor. The problem I think I was having is that besides for the end where you find out she is there willingly there are no signs that she trusts or cares for Draco. You've written this story from her POV and we get a lot of what is going on inside her head. And still see no trust of affection there. I think a fix one fix for this story would be writing it from Draco's point of view, that way we get no hints from inside Hermione's head, and we can then assume she is thinking certain ways.

    I have no problem with dark themes as long as they are handled properly. As it's bones this could be an interesting story, but it needs some overhaul on execution.
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  • From ArielKidd on May 12, 2016
    " But if you are implying that they end up together, then why would Draco let Blaise fuck her and Pansy do all that shit to her. I guess it just doesnt make sense to me. Cause now, if they end up together... His friends will just think she's a whore... But maybe we're not suppose to think that far ahead"
    And then, a couple of sentences afterwards you say this:
    "Blaise really isn't a friend: an acquaintance, as Draco said in the flashback. I don't think they speak to each other on a regular basis. Same to Pansy. I think Hermione is going to leave Ron. Him catching her coming in so late was probably the straw the camel's back. Ron is the healthy, and would do anything for her. Draco is the dark, and would make her feel unbelievable."
    So... they're together or ...
    Sorry, I just don't think the author's notes really cleared that up. Definitely not my favourite story going around, I kind of felt it was a little messy and jarring to read. It definitely felt like Hermione didn't want a single part of what was happening to her, so for the ending to be revealed that she was there by choice was just perplexing, really. If you're planning to fix the story up a bit at any point, I hope you work on the fluidity of the narrative for sake of the reader. Thanks AKxx
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  • From Sherlocked1971 on May 12, 2016
    Yes I am that sick puppy who likes the end....;0)

    Stockholm Syndrome, yes well is it?
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  • From dweek on May 11, 2016
    This is a dark story about a woman being blackmailed into doing all sorts of deviant sexual acts. She think about how she hates every minute, but the acts seem to turn her on in a very base way. With this story you are getting violent seemingly random sexual acts, and the writer dosen't seem to have the attention to lead from one thing to another. It was jarring how random everything felt. The end is also a little annoying as there is no clue before that moment what is really going on, if you are going to have a twist at the end of your story, your reader should be able to go back and see that it was coming, even if they are subtle. But in this story you spend most of the time in Hermione's head and there is NO indication that what Draco says at the end makes any since at all. All and all the story is more meh than anything.
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