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Reviews for Deliver Me

By : Aresgodofchaos
  • From ANON - Guess who on January 15, 2017

    Merope and... and ALBUS???!!! OF ALL PEOPLE???!!! Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww XP

    Haha yeah I know I'm throwing flames with a flame-thrower.... But other than that, I enjoyed this very much XD Oh wait, I'm a bit miffed at SevxTom (at first because... idk, I went through an eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww stage at the revelation of the Slytherin Consort) but seeing that they love each other I guess it couldn't be that bad.... maybe.... I just wish that Harry's life isn't so... cursed. I mean, isn't it sad enough that he went into azkaban and got dragon pox and got saved in time and now he's got people throwing themselves onto him just for name, fame and glory and such and he's been an orphan since one year old and has been abused and all that and now it's just sad that there are so many bad people around him--attracted to him, I should add. *sighh........ Soooooooooo when's the next update? *hopeful eyes


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  • From on November 16, 2016

    You are still writing this I hope?  I'm into this and would hate to never know what happens!  Rorek sounds totally self centered and cruel or willing to be cruel.   Our sweet Harry besides being totally beautiful, brave and intelligent is learning the hard way not to take anything at face value...look behind the screens and dig deep into each person to know them inside and out before you even think about letting them into your very small trusted person circle.  I hope he sees RoRek as he really is and can protect himself.


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  • From ANON - Lilybud on September 18, 2016

    I am so happy for the update. Great chapter looking foreward to more


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  • From Demonica on September 06, 2016
    I love this story, I really do. But could you please redo chapter 12. It actually gave me a headache trying to understand it. And the descriptions on Rorek, you repeated a paragraph. This one had a lot of run ons and a severe lack of punctuations. Still, I'm really excited to see what happens next. Love " the candy sucking old fool"'s downright evil sister.
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  • From BAFan on September 05, 2016

    I'm a bit suprised that Harry included Bill and Charlie in his condemnation.  I thought that they had not taken part in anything?

     

    ~Debbie


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  • From ANON - on July 01, 2016
    Frankly this is a page turner. I read it all in one sitting and am excited for more.
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  • From ANON - ry on June 14, 2016
    I have very much enjoyed this story thus far. I look forward to future updates.
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  • From JuliaOS13 on May 28, 2016
    Enjoying the story, I look forward to reading more in the future :)
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on May 28, 2016
    I just finished ch4 and I am loving this story so far!
    I think it's really well written, just the right amount of intrigue.
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  • From wolfcathope on May 27, 2016
    Wow I love this story but feel like I am going to need to start take to take notes. I hope Harry finds some love and support
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