Reviews for Muggle Technology and HeroismBy : Tommy-Lane |
You definitely have not los this reader! I have been waiting patiently for Harry to pluck up his Gryffindor bravery and tell Draco how he feels. Now that he's done it, I am hoping so hard that Draco doesn't break Harry's heart.
You're killing me! I check every day to see if there's an update, and get a rush of excitement each time there is. I start reading, instantly reingrossed in the tale. And each time I'm left torn between being disappointed that Harry and Draco aren't having their happily-ever-after yet, and being fiercely glad that I'll get to read more. You bring such depths to the characters that I'm lost in their stories.
A couple of small editing notes:
1) It should be "It's all for naught," instead of "It's all for not"
2) It should be "his finely cultivated Malfoy drawl," instead of "his finally cultivated Malfoy drawl."
I still enjoyed it with the twist! It was really to easy to be true, lol, there had to be more angst somewhere. At least we know now that Harry's love isn't one sided! Love the update!
SP777
about #8...
WHY do I have the feeling you're going to drop us into the cement....HARD......with the next cahpter?
Wow it was amazing, I love the way you write how even in the moment there's still the character in there, the slight hesitations it's amazing. Please don't make me wait too long. I need to know what Draco will say in the morning
I love this story! I've been reading it faithfully and am so happy with this much anticipated update!! I just hope that Draco doesn't try and backpedal his feelings in the morning... Lovely work! Looking forward to what you do next!
Finally, it's been so for poor Harry hiding his love. I'm hoping Draco doesn't screw this up by leaving before Harry wakes up. I think Draco loves Harry, but he is more afraid of screwing things up and not having Harry in his life at all. This has so much emotion, you do an awesome job if making me feel. I look forward to your updates.
I am loving this story so far! Can't wait to see what happens next!!! 😍😍😍
Different take on Draco and Harry. Please keep writing.Â
Please don't keep us hanging! Enough teasing, please show us what happens next! Completely hooked and always checking back for new chapters x
I always get so excited when the next chapter is up!!!!! I love that Harry admitting to Draco how he felt was done in a sweet, nervous way instead of aggressively sexual. Not that I would have a problem with aggressively sexual :) just not for this part. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Ohh can't wait for you to write more! What a cliffhanger! My heart is beating so fast now! Wow!
Nope! I'm still here and eagerly awaiting more awesome. 😉🙌😁
Can I say FINALLY! Loved this chapter. Gave me sooooo many different feels.
I just found this story and LOVE it! Can't wait to see what happens next ;)
I love love love this fic! Draco is so fun and cute with the muggle technology. I hope he sees now what Harry is feeling and doesn't push him away. I don't want this fic to end I hope there's a lot more chapters :) Can't wait for the next update xx
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