Omg I need the finale!!!!! This is sooooo freaking intense!!!!!

Ooh hero Harry, I love it. I don't want it to end. I want them to get together, but the read about their lives as I am also attached to this version of them. 

Hooray for a new chapter!  And such a good one, too.  I like this aspect of Harry, the determination and the drive.  The stubbornness that kept him clinging to Draco while simultaneously avoiding disclosing his emotions transformed into the will to fight for what they both want, even if there's no clear path to achieving that aim yet.  I particularly appreciate how you're evolving the characters and their reactions while remaining true to the personalities as you've defined them for this story.  It feels like the changes are organic to the circumstances as they unfold isntead of being forced to take the story where you want it.

SP777

about #11....

If I was a young girl I'd go ''squeee....!!!'', but I'm an older woman so I'll just go ''OMGGGG!!!'' :-D

..and now Harry will fight! Draco should be singing ''fooled around and fell in love'' by Elvin Bishop

Oh my sweet Jesus I am OBSESSED. I started reading this story a few weeks ago and now I desperately check for updates. I went into withdrawel and read all your other stories here too. I love it all. You really have a way of creating and recreating Drarry. I need more. 

Thanks for cheering me up,

Little.

Please come back, it seems like it has been forever. You made me actually cry so now you need to make me smile.  

Hestia 

SP777

about #10..

Hope Draco makes the right decision, no matter how hard it is...I know marrying Pansy is not where his heart is at, but with Pansy at least she knows the situation and will not cause too much of a fuss if Draco starts seeing Harry again. Just hope Harry can wrap his head around this & not make this harder for Draco.

Sigh. I apologize for reviewing thrice now. However, as a person I am one to try and make sure I am understood correctly, concisely, and without and misconceptions. So I really want to clarify: I dont think this story is bad. I dont think you are a bad writer or author. It is simply just not a story I can follow. I dont think having angst is bad, or even a very angsty story, but I check tags for it specifically. That was why I recommended adding the tag. I also mentioned the summary because, like the lack of tag, I felt it conveyed the story in quite a positive/not-alot-of-angst light. It seemed like, perhaps only to me, it would be a short story and the big part of the story was the CHASE for Draco. Not after the chase where issues arise.

I really want to re-iterate, I dont dislike your story. I simply cant continue following it because I am one to think this story may perhaps be too angsty for my tastes. That is all. I have written and shown stories out on fanfiction, I know what having a review can mean when someone is just biting and nasty and cruel. I have read them in other stories, and I have gotten criticisms myself. I would hope what I have written is understood clearer. I dont like to write reviews where I feel like I am simply bashing or anything of the sort. I have read previous stories of yours and adored them. A lot. The obessed story with Harry cheating for Draco is actually one of my favorites I have ever read. So please do continue on with this stories and stories in general :)! I dont want my little self to ever deter or make an author feel unpleasant to continue writing.

And thank you for updating the tag and summary! Greatly appreciated! 

Yes my previous comment I was quite upset lol. I dont think opinions which are not cruel but not all lovey-dovey should be censored/stifled. It holds a writer back.

Hi, back again. if you dont like my review, you dont need to comment. A review is for the STORY not for the reviews themselves. The story was too angsty and they updated their summary and their tags, so maybe other reviewers who love the story can love it and back off? Not everyone needs to kiss the authors butts. 
 

Its a review section, I reviewed the story. Get over it.

You made me cry! I can feel their pain, great writing. 

Please ignore the person who wrote the review about it being to angsty and saying this or that should've happened. If they think they can do better then they can write their own. 

I had high hopes for this fanfiction but I think the last two chapters seal the deal for me to drop it. Everything going perfect and SURPRISE Draco has a betrothal? Beyond the cliche, which really isnt a big deal it could make sense, its just comes off so....needless? I feel like there could have been another way to bring drama, though that is likely purely opinion. It's not a bad story but I am not one for all-the-time-angst. I dont think one chapter of what seems like happiness can take away from the fact that this entire story and chapters have been angst. (Which by the way you should add to your tags)

Reading the summary for the plot, I was not expecting it to be easy but Harry shouldnt even try at this point. It mentions 'before Harry can actually have him', but the truth is that Harry can never actually have him. As evidenced by the chapters and Dracos own choices. As this story is from Harry's POV, all I see is Harry pushing and trying and nothing from Draco. I am sure there is reasonings behind everything but I dont care to wait another 5 chapters/month for everything to make sense and be OK again. In this story it makes the most obvious sense Draco should have just stayed with Ethan and Harry should find someone else. Draco, regardless of his heart, isnt doing anything on his end to make it worth it/try for Harry at all. 

I hope this review doesnt come across harsh, as I do think your writing is good and your characters have more than one dimension, which I appreciate! But I just find it all a bit bland with too much sadness and not enough uplifting moments to carry this story through. Just like an all around happy story with no drama can become dull. Or a story with too much drama and no peace can become exhausting, repetitive and boring in its own way.

I will keep an eye out incase you come out with another story though. :)

SP777

about #9...theme song for this chapter Rihanna ''Needed Me''....

Well I was hoping Harry would do a series of ''WHAT!!'' before he broke the dishes of food, but this was just as good...and who says Harry can't still be with Draco regardless, but I don't think Harry can handle being a ''side chick''. Come on, I know there's aloophole somewhere!

P.S: yes I'm good at reading between the lines

I wonder if Narcissa knows he is in love with someone.  Is she pushing this or is their a magical contract they have no control over.  I really wonder what role she is playing in all this.

I knew something was coming to keep them apart especially when Draco was at his mom's. I hope there is a way out of this. I don't like the betrothal, but it sure makes great reading. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing your stories.