Click Here!

  • 1

Reviews for Fortune Favours The Brave

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From MargBennington on April 30, 2017

    I really enjoyed reading this story. The Malfoys are sly and vindictive. I like the way you wrote Lucius. I hope you continue this story !


    Report Review

  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 12, 2016
    Wow, there was so much in that one and quite a few plots. I can only say I am liking the characters you're writing and enjoying their interactions. I loved Lucius' little loss of control, but I am sorry Arthur seems to be a pummel horse for him. I truly enjoy Hermione's head conversations, and I am horrified by her torment. I can't believe how seamlessly you've woven so much backstory in, and I hope this awful man is stopped before he really hurts someone else, especially Hermione. I am snot sure I like Astoria, but I love that her machinations might work and help Hermione finally see her own self-worth. That chapter length was AWESOME!! Thank you, HG4eva
    Report Review

  • From Mary_Met on June 11, 2016
    I love this story. I think you really have written Lucius well. I love it when Lucius Malfoy is Lucius Malfoy. You seem to have him staying exactly the bad boy he is, not too evil, but certainly not light and fluffy. Light and fluffy Lucius is not Lucius. Your older Hermione is so well done! I think you have written her like she would be. She has some years of life experience under her belt now. I don't think she comes across as too hard, but just the right amount of self interest that has been added over time. I think you are showing what a brave naive Hermione would be like in future times. She is still brave and thinks of others, but she has developed over time to include the need to see the real world and take steps to help herself as well. Good job. I can't wait to read more. I can't wait to read the bits that umm... get ..ummm...physical. I may be a perv, the jury is still out on that. (That's because I locked them out and they can't get back in- I know what they are going to say) Please write as fast as you can because I feel my inner perv stirring LOL. Great work.
    Mary
    Report Review

  • From Mary_Met on June 11, 2016
    Not sure if you got my review on the 1st chapter or not. I will try again. This was a very good one! I think you are really showing character development, I am loving the way you are writing Lucius. I can't wait to read more. I can't wait to see how Hermione and Lucius begin their "courtship". I think you have nailed this one. Please update soon. I need more of this story.
    Mary
    Report Review

  • From HarryGinny4eva on June 03, 2016
    An intriguing and interesting beginning. I look forward to Lucius actually falling for her to see if it changes his attitude any and Hermione coming into her own and showing Ron and the world what he gave up! Thank you for having Ginny and Harry stand so firmly at her side. :-) HG4eva
    Report Review

  • From Alesia on May 31, 2016
    I am really intrigued with this first chapter! It will be great to see where you are planning on going with this.
    Report Review

  • 1
T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!