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By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Jester on January 25, 2017

    That is a nice form of custody. I am glad Draco is all better and was able to show Harry how he felt. It would have taken ages for Harry to figure it out.. 

    loved that story- thank you for sharing!


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  • From ANON - SP777 on August 14, 2016

    A nice ending..tho I have to admit I would love to have seen another dinner where Molly was trying to feed Draco again. :-)


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  • From ANON - on August 05, 2016

    SP777

    about #4...

    Another good chapter, kinda miss reading about Quidditch...


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  • From Kain on July 15, 2016

    Aw, Molly going all mother hen on Draco and feeding him and loved the banter between Draco and Harry. Foods so good probably because it has that motherly touch too it.

    love the visual of Harry rolling up to Azkaban and slapping the tast out of Lucius mout for telling a child these kind of stories.

    Sad seeing Draco expect the worst and continuosly getting surprised by the kindness shown towards him from people who were/are enemies of his family, aside from the encounter George who is working through his own pain.

    Sweet and awkward moment between Ron and Draco where neither of them were sure of how to proceed but were being polite with the other. And now at least Draco can stretch his legs so to speak and wont be confined to just one place, despite how nice it has been.


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  • From ANON - on July 10, 2016

    SP777

    about #2..

    At least we know this much, Draco will be 2 or 3 stones heavier by the time he leaves. :-)


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  • From ANON - on July 07, 2016

    You hooked me with the first chapter and the kept my attention with the second. I like how Harry is babbling away to protect Draco, it's much more interesting than Harry confronting George. 


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  • From ANON - Janelle on June 19, 2016
    Great start! I love the continuing characterization of Draco. Draco has gone from living with Voldemort, an evil man torturing and killing people, in Draco's own home and hoping the same outcome won't befall his own family (especially since his father had disappointed Voldemort and was often being punished for the failures: Draco's impossible assignment to kill Dumbledore, giving up his wand and home to Voldemort). Such an existence had to be very stressful and tormenting for Draco. He tried to close himself off mentally to the situation so he could control his thoughts and emotions around Voldemort.

    Continuing to your fanfiction, we are beginning with a Draco who had been living in the presents of someone who has had it out for his family. Now, all of that has been taken away and he has been entrusted to someone who he has thought of as a personal enemy and under the roof of a long line of Malfoy rivals. Once you start living in such a dangerous situation, as having Voldemort under your roof, you continue the same habits in order to survive. Draco has moved from one foe to the next and lives in constant fear of vengeance being inflicted upon him, if not for his own actions then for his fathers (once again).

    Draco is in an unhealthy state and I hope Harry can heal him by showing him kindness. I'm really hoping for a scene where just the two of them play Quidditch to get Draco out of the house and doing something normal like chasing a snitch around like they use to ... only this time on friendlier terms.

    Update soon! Excited to see where this story will go.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on June 19, 2016
    Well this is promising. :-) Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Kain on June 15, 2016
    Well this is an interesting take on Drarry. Not sad to see Lucius get put away but at least Narcissa only got 2 years so she will see her son again relatively soon and there are no more Dementors at the prison. At least this way Harry is able to fulfill any life debts he may owe Draco and his mother by taking the boy in and maybe some time away from his parents will help Draco to broaden his mind and see the world in a different light without their influence.

    Wonder how much of the stories Draco's parents told him were true or whether they were just exagerated lies told to keep the feud going through the next generation. Wouldnt put it past Lucius given the way he raised Draco and the crap he put him through.

    Wonder whether or not Draco will be able to get over his fear of the Weasley's in time and perhaps even bond with a few of them coughmollycough and how his relationship with Harry will grow. And is Draco sick at the end of the chapter?

    -waits patiently for the next chapter-
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