Realized I didn't sign my last review.

I'm going to read the rest of your stories.

What order would you like them read?

Always like the input from the author.  

Waiting for the epilogue of Tango and the list of your other stories.

Sincerely,

pickles87

UH YES EPILOGUE!

Isn't it amazing when a one shot is written that it continues into MORE.

Starting to enjoy the word MORE.

Please continue....

When the husband has a moment will have him read your story.  It is AMAZING

Oh almost forgot THANK YOU

I vote yes for an epilogue!  

My God, these last two chapters made my brain melt! Thanks for delivering a double helping of Severus. I'd wished for one in Accidental Affair, and you granted my wish. You have my vote for an epilogue!

First off, "Maybe someone who doesn’t release their stories until they are completely finished?"
--Bahahahaha! Trust me, I'm doing that for everyone's benefit. And it's not teasing if I haven't started anything. (Plus then the next story won't take so long because I'll be able to work on a new one while I'm posting the other.) And you know that reward story will never be earned. Maybe I can get it done for you for Christmas or something. (But only if you release GS from all hostage situations.)

This chapter was excellent. Two Snapes are always better than one. The snakes freaked me the fuck out, but I can roll with it. They were handy in terms of positioning. And I liked the edgy quality they added to the scene.

I lost one of my favorite bits (and I'm too lazy to go find it again), so here's the rest of my favs.

"She hadn’t known him any deeper than she would a performer, or an actor, one whom controls everything that is known of him, manufactures every perception."--I love this. It might be my fav of the favorites. (I think it's who not whom in this instance by the way.) I love this comparison and what it says about him.

"Bits were sticking out like the wires of a broken appliance"--Great image.

(and she only just managed to stop herself form lunging into them.--from lunging)

"His cock also seemed to be making preparations, no longer lounging in insouciant indifference but jutting forward, eager and attentive."--Mmmmm, preparedness is hot. I also like the idea of insouciant cocks.

"rising to rigid attention like he was preparing for a shoot-out—pistols at dawn—although sunrise was a few hours away."--Hahahaha! Perfection.

" punch drunk "--This was my favorite phrase this chapter.

"exuberant streams"--Exuberant made me love this.

Epilogue? As long as it's a smut-fest. Or incredibly touching. They need each other. I can't wait to see how you wrap this up.

Holy hell! Two Severuses?! Egads! I loved the line about it being the possible last orgasm of her life because yes, that might just about kill her with pleasure. lol  Yum, yum, yum!! Not an elegant description, but how I feel right now. lol Thank you, hon!! HG4eva

Hello,
I so rarely review, but I'm enjoying this soooo much. I vote for a chapter 4! I think Severus' POV would be great. I think we need to follow his desperate loss of control down the rabbit hole ( as it were) just a little bit more. This story has also yet to reach a satisfying conclusion (i.e. an end to the night preferably where feelings are dealt with, in the most fun way, if possible). I understand as a fellow writer that we become waylayed by things like writers block and god forbid real life but I'd love another chapter real soon.


The wandering angel

Your story is very good. Very vidid!

Great work!

Thank you once again! Her trust in him was perfect, as was his awe in her. If another chapter is to come (fingers crossed), I like the idea of both perspectives. I wonder if she figures out a way to keep him... :-) Thanks! HG4eva

'... on the off chance' - You're joking, right? Yes, please give us a nice conclusion of this story, however many chapters it takes! :-) As to the POV - well done with your second Severus' POV. Not that there was too much thinking involved (probably still more than with your average person during several iterations of certain exhausting, physical activities) - more feeling, but that is to be expected in such situations, I think. ;) I would say, show us both perspectives. Now, we've had lots and lots of them physically expressing their emotions, but I believe they should give verbal a try - especially to clear up that no, both do not want their association to end at one night. Even if it's just something like 'Okay, this worked well, wanna repeat it...frequently? On a regular basis? - Yes, let's!' Maybe the brave Gryffindor should make the start. Sev is quite certain to follow - not that she can be sure of that. Okay, so much for my own conjectures.
On to this chapter which was - WOW! Pretty much indescribably good. And they're getting more and more intimate and emotional. Very kind of you, to let Hermione get to a bed after that workout on some pretty uncomfortable furniture. One small thing I believe to be a wrong word is 'whilst stealing glances as her'. I am quite certain, that 'as' is supposed to be an 'at'. Everything else was again wonderful to read. One more thing I keep forgetting to mention: Are you competing for some title of 'Queen of Alliterations'? And if so, with whom? It adds much more humor to these situations, but comes into play so frequently as to not be accidental...
Till next time and hopefully another chapter!

Have a nice weekend

LeWyKi

I loved Severus's POV this time. Blisteringly hot. And the alliteration was stupendous, but I had to stop listing them all so I could coherently read without taking notes.

"He could still feel her walls hitching and grabbing around him."--Hitching made me love this.

"remained in repose, superbly snug, basking blissfully"--I liked your three set of alliteration.

"fetchingly feline"--Love this.

"his fingers prickling with unspent hexes."--Love this too.

("He hadn’t want to take advantage of her and her penchant . . ."--wanted.)

"Did she feel him awakening inside her? "--Fuck! This is excellent.

"riding the curve of his chin"--God dammit. This is perfect. My rough draft is shit. Must go rewrite.

"her eyelids had sunk like half-moons as he’d ground into her, slipping over the swell of her deliciously dilating pupils"--Fuck, fuck, fuckity fuck. I'm in the midst of a word wetty.

"salacious sewers"--Oh thank God! I have a label for my mind map now. People are always getting lost in the kinky kitchen or lacivious living room, but I keep telling them to turn left and go down the stairs. It's the only way to get to the lusty library and Dungeons of Desire. No shortcuts.

"Now it was on a tight deadline. So incredibly tight."--Bahahahaha!

(whilst stealing glances as her over his clasped hands.--at her)

"and, as it turned out, to rub into the rump of certain students that happened to drop by and were keen for an all-night fuck-a-thon."--Hahahaha.

"slippery succubus"--Yeeeeeeees!

"at the scalloped edge of her opening"--Damn you! I love this. Why didn't I come up with it first?

"his frock coat clamped between her teeth."--Excellent visual.

"Make me sure.”--God dammit. I'm going to have to use that line in real life some day.

"his cock would be her anchor. And he needed to be able to swivel her smoothly around that point."--Fuuuuuck! You're killing me with words and hotness.

"to accommodate his solid intrusion."--Unh!

(His cock was now buried over half way inside her delicious virgin opening--halfway is one word)

"his heart staggered."--Love it.

(He split his fingers and reamed his cock between them and her face, which was now tilted slightly towards him seemed to lose all tone . . .--Put a comma between that first "them" and "and". Right now it sounds like he's reaming his cock between his fingers and her face.)

"He split his fingers and reamed his cock between them"--Oh and, by the way, this is hot as fuck and makes me wish I had another hand.

You are the succubus, not Hermione. Who else would tease us all so mercilessly? You know everyone wants more. Stop pretending you haven't started the next chapter already. (I know you too well.) You're gorging yourself on duck wraps and evilly drumming your fingers together a la Mr. Burns. 

This is such a wonderful story! I loved the first chapter,it was so sensual, then the next two (which I read back to back) were so devious I'm practically drooling over what might happen next. Please write another chapter, please!!!!

Damn.  That was hot.  You are exceptional at writing erotic scenes.  Well done.

Feel free to continue ;)

Add me to the pile of those who loved this second chapter! Superb. -dezzu

YOU again! Damn you

... not really - you made me watch In Demand in repeat ALL NIGHT. Good thing I got the DVD. I love Tango although I cannot dance it.

Thanks a lot

And thank you so much for the second part. This was smoking hot. And I totally agree with all here: Intelligence is a huge turn-on.