Reviews for Lunaticus Book One: Half MoonBy : JBankai89 |
Aaahhhh!!! I hadn't been on here for a while and I saw you posted the sequel! I then realised I hadn't finished this story. It was really great to be able to read through it so quickly over the past few days so I'm glad I waited for you to finish posting. This is definitely one of the most well written stories I've ever read on this site. The way you make these characters your own but still keep their very core as accurate as possible, like Rons loyalty and Hermiones misguided ideals, they were definitely high lights of the story. So many authors on this site neglect the secondary characters but you had Ron and Hermione grow with Harry and his relationship and it really was a pleasure to read. I love your writing style, a perfect mix of humour, drama and passion, it's so captivating. I can't wait to explore more of your work and read the sequel to this story,
Nina
I am someone who has been reading off of this site for a good many years. Finding something that is well written is really hard. I am on fanfiction.net as a writer but never have written anything and put it on here. I have to say this story is enrapturing. I read through all 26 chapters in one day and look forward to continue reading the story. I was skeptical of the pairing when i had opened up the story but the more I read the more you pulled me in. Do you ever write originals? Hope you post the next chapter soon! If I can figure out how to save you as a favorite writer I most certainly will.
Loved the intensity between Remus, Moony and Harry.
Can't wait to see where you take the next part of this.
Wow, this is one of the best fanfics I've read. Full of angst. Love it. Update asap!
Oh my god, Harry, NO! I hope Remus does not get in trouble for what was justified murder.
Hi.
I just wanted to say, I just lovd your story. Your descriptions of the bon that develops between Remus and Harry is excelent. I especially enjoyed the way you wrote about all the different challenges they faced during the building of their relationship. So much more refreshing than other harry potter is mate of some creature fics, where he finds out he's mated to someone and its pretty much, Yeah look, I'm mated so I might as well just accept it it without a fight. That all feels a bit rushed to me, so great job. Your portrayal of werewolf lore and culture as well as the character emotions was very well done. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your fics in the near future.
Yay, a physical progression of their relationship! Excited to read more on this! Great story.
Ugh I need more!! Lol I can't wait till the next chapter!
AMAZINGNESS! Keep it up. Best RemusxHarry I think I've ever read!
When will the next chapter be out? Really enjoying the story
This is some great writing you've got here. Well thought out story line and depth of characters is keeping your story moving, enticing, and invoking emotionally. I'll be watching for this story from now on.
love this story
I can't wait for more! I hope everything gets better on the home front for you!
I think you've done a good job of balancing Harry's fear of Remus after being attacked and Harry's love and want to be around him. Harry wants things to go back to normal yet he has a negative physical response to being too close to Remus right now; you highlighted that well by having Harry flinch and tense up as a knee-jerk reaction to Remus getting too close or sudden movements.
I'm excited to read more and see how Harry and Remus will cope with their damaged relationship. I'm about to re-read this story. I'm trying to recall whether or not Remus has said to Harry: "I love you." Because I have an inkling that Harry's (original) trouble with not being able to get too physically intimate with Remus is that Remus hasn't declared love and Harry want's both of them to be in-love. That's not to say that Harry doesn't know that Remus cares for him or loves him as James's son. I think Harry needs to know that Remus is in-love with him; that their platonic love has evolved into romantic love. I also don't think Harry knows that that is what he needs to hear.
All right, I'm off to re-read. Thank you for such an amazing story. You're a great writer.
This was good! I feel so torn for them both! I can't wait for more!
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