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Reviews for Lunaticus Book One: Half Moon

By : JBankai89
  • From BAFan on August 13, 2016

    Ch. 12

    I know Hermione means well, but she's too convinced of her own righteousness to admit that she may be wrong in this case.  I hope she comes to her senses soon, but I'm afraid it may take something drastic happening to Harry for that to happen.

     

    ~Debbie  


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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on August 12, 2016

    How dare Hermione believe she knows what is best for Harry AND dismiss what his is saying - very typical reversion to know-it-all behaviour.

    How dare she send Remus somewhere unknown. Are we sure she really is not with the anti-werewolf group.

    AND especially how dare she take away Harry's right to leave a room with a door barrier. - I hope he gets really angry with her and lets her know this is not to be tolerated - get rid of her from his life completely as she has no right to make these decisions for him. Even Ginny was more mature and supportive of Harry than Hermione is being.

    This behavious is reflective of Dumbledores 'for the greater good' speeches and boy were they annoying.

    Update soon please.


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  • From ANON - WickedSlytherin on August 12, 2016

    After chapter 5 -

    I never thought I'd like this pairing sooo much! I love what you've done with them. I may have a new favorite!


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  • From ANON - Janelle on August 11, 2016

    Wow, amazing chapter.  You are a tallented writer.  Keep it up.


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  • From ANON - cat on August 06, 2016

    MOOOOORE feed my obssession lol awesome job LOVE LOVE it 


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  • From ANON - Janelle on August 05, 2016

    Great chapter.  I'm glad Harry and Remus didn't fall into bed after their first kiss.  It's nice to see a story where things are being taken slow in order for a deeper connection to develop.  Remus is really earning Harry's trust by stopping when things are going too far for Harry. 

    Love this story.

     


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  • From sara101 on August 04, 2016

    Damn it Harry you're killing us! Lol can't wait to read what happens next ^.^


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  • From ANON - on July 31, 2016

    I love your writing style and the way the chapter 's content is organized. This meeting was so cute . Man, that hate Vernon, who he thinks he is ? The idea of ​​spanking , regardless of the circumstance is so repugnant to me that I can only anger those people who practice this cowardly violence. Despite this unfortunate part , congratulations on fanfiction, she's wonderful.♥ 


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  • From ANON - on July 28, 2016
    Really love this story ^^ Please update soon :-D
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  • From ANON - on July 25, 2016

    While I love Harry/Remustove I think Remus owes Ginny an apology for this.  She is losing a lot.


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  • From ANON - on July 24, 2016

    good god they both just need to let it go and go on cause that's that with them ...good one more please !!!!!!!


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  • From thewindcharmer on July 22, 2016

    I just wanted to say that I absolutely adore your writing style (I'm also really enjoying the story, if course!). 


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  • From ANON - on July 19, 2016

    Nie so far, but I really hope that lupin does not hurt harry ok...he hasdone so much for this to happen to him !!!!!!! hope all goes ok and slow with them.....thanks for this !!!! 


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  • From BAFan on July 18, 2016

    Ch. 5

     

    Not anticlimactic at all.  What a terrible situation for everyone.

     

    ~Debbie


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  • From BAFan on July 18, 2016

    Well, that's a twist on werewolf lore I've not seen before.  You're off to a rousing start!

     

     

    ~Debbie


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