Reviews for Sex EdBy : Alcoholic_Rootbeer |
Oh my gosh this is so good! My heart just broke that I got to the end and there is no more yet!14458
Why do I get the feeling that potion is going to cause more problems for Neville? lol So, both admit to being in love with the other to themselves, but are not ready to say it to each other. Check. Both are keeping it from the people they care about, no matter their rationalizations. Check. Both know they're idiots. Check! Both have to spend a night without the other at a party where they can't talk about their true loves. Check. So much for you to fix... lol Thanks, hon! Off to read one more. :-D
Seeing 3 updates and not being able to read them was horrible! But, finally, I have some time... YAY! Neville took it as well as can be expected and was brilliant in getting Draco to fund research for his parents! I am still sorry he's so used and discarded, because him still feeling Hermione's kiss was sad. Their time in the tub was hot, of course, and I grinned widely at his self-admission of love, but I have a feeling him not telling his parents is going to cause more trouble, before it gets fixed... Well, I guess I will know soon, as I have 2 more lovely chapters to read. Yay, you! HG4eva
Re: Chapter 25
How DARE you stop it there? AAAAAAGGGGGHHHHHH
^_^
Will that extra drop make Neville cocky? Will he try to get overly familiar with Hermione or take it further? Not sure if this potion is a good thing especially since Neville is so sensitive. I think if he did anything to Hermione he would be severely crushed.
Draco will have to defend the young ones and in an effort to do that will spill his secret.
waiting for more.
I love, love this story. It's fun and refreshing. I also love the speed of the updates so I don't forget the specifics of the story. Can't wait for more.
Re: Chapter 24
A bit of boat-rocking, eh? Nothing to progress a story like some emotional turmoil, I always say.^_^
Re: Chapter 23.
Poor Neville.:D But what will happen if he gets a little too confident at the party, hm?
Thanks for touching the consent subject That's the foremost subject in sex ed in my opinion.
Haha Fanfiction stories the root of all evil.
The 'L'word how sweet and stupid of Draco not to voice his inner turmoil.
Excuse me as I just shed my tears here all over the floor...this Saturday is gonna be epic or a cluster fuck. I can just imagine draco swooping in to the borrow dressed to the nines declaring his feelings and relationship status. Ha lol okay I'm gonna stop now can't wait and thank you both for all your hard work
And they both get closer to saying those Three Little Words™. Loving it.
I have no idea how you did it, but you balanced their real relationship and their fantasy beautifully! He took her confession very well, better than expected actually, and she (swat swat swat ) handled his as expected. lol Though, her lying about their relationship did soften the blows. ha ha ha I LOVED that he used the words making love as part of make up sex. I think the L-word is going to fall out of someone really soon. They danced all around it. lol Finally, I look forward to Neville's reactions to both of their confessions. This should be fun. lol Thank you again! HG4eva
Fabulous, absolutely so, delicious, wicked, saucy, scrumptious and so much more....
More role play.....
I love the witty dialogue you're good!!
Oh and Gryffindor it was,
Fabulous, absolutely so, delicious, wicked, saucy, scrumptious and so much more....
More role play.....
I love the witty dialogue you're good!!
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