Reviews for Sex EdBy : Alcoholic_Rootbeer |
Omg what's in the box! I really am curious how this will play out.
LOL at Hermione's failing-to-think-on-her-feet. I love this story.
Wow, Hermione! You, too?! I say it again, poor Neville. That man is going to need a serious vacation when these two are done with him, and I hope there is the world's most perfect woman waiting for him on that beach. Ron (who I love in canon) is an idiot! Because he's now ready, he expects her to get over their past and just jump back in? Stupid! I love this story! Thanks, HG4eva
Ooooh, I never liked Ron... But he's so much worse in this.
Hermione report to Miss. Sherlocked17, you'll write I shall not tell lies about Draco and make it a 100!!
Ooooh a little student dress set, would it be Slytherin or Gryffindor? I'm right yes?!
Yaaaaaassssss corset please!! Corsets are awesome x3 but oh! I'm sure you have plenty of great ideas! I'll be looking for the next chapter!
Ahahaha! Not what I was expecting, and I love how neither Hermione or Neville realize what's really going on.^_^
Are you sure you're not J.K. Rowling herself, becuase, Jesus Christ, you capture the characters perfect. Wonderful job!
Hahahaha ya, this cracks me up. I have this big smile plastered on my face.
Poor Neville talking about getting the wrong end of the stick. Hahahaha, no pun intended. I love how you write smut, but these funny parts (again no pun intended) make you an awesome writer.
Don't know how far you've written things along, but maybe you could incorporate feelings in the lesson and talking about when you have sex for the first time, awkwardness, things being different for boys and girls. My fellow teacher and I divided girl talk and boy talk.
Gotdammit! Neville stop being a doof and get that they are dating not whoring each other out xD yeeeessshh. Poor Hermione. Ah well. It'll come out.
Anxious for the next chappy!
Wow. I feel like the story should be renamed, "Poor Neville." lol He has it so wrong, but he is such a good man and friend, poor dear. And, I hope Hermione withholds sex for a while when she learns the truth. Draco taking advantage of Neville is to be expected, but his childishness in front of students, and then dragging it out is just plain schoolboy-level mean. She is going to blow her top! I can't waitT :-) Thank you!! HG4eva
Phew. Well then...... I feel like Neville's not gunna drop it and that he might do something stupid like tell Ron but I hope I'm wrong. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
It was amazing! Really wish there was more. Looking for a pt. 2 somewhere ...
Chapter17 the best one to date, that is so cringe worthy delicious, feeling sorry for Neville and also a bit cross with him for invading Draco's privacy, him getting hot and bothered about those photos, getting the wrong end of the stick about Draco being a gigolo, funniest eavesdropping on conversation ever.
Keep it up you're so good at comedy/erotica, cleverly wrought together. Genius oh and I can rant on forever, shame I cant bookmark this. Maybe I'll put a link to my tumbler page if that's oke?
Oh dear. I like Neville, but really, he should have known better than to try to match wits with Draco.^_^
Brilliant writing style btw. Your style is quite colourful and indeed humourfull.
Oh and you wouldn't believe this but I do teach sex ed to twelve year olds. It is hilarious! The questions they ask and sometimes embarrassing as well, but hey someone needs to teach it huh?!
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