Reviews for Sex EdBy : Alcoholic_Rootbeer |
I hope it turns out as funny and sexually frustrated as It feels like in chapter one.
The beginning was very sweet and loving and his final move was classy as all hell. :-) Neville finally got brave and was a good friend to her (even if he's wrong), so yay! But, I hope he isn't too publically embarrassed when the truth comes out. Draco had too much fun with that in the end. lol Thanks again! HG4eva
That was utter, delicious, smirk-filled perfection! Dayum!! Thank you again, HG4eva
X.X omg I'm dead. Are we sure I wasn't Hermione? Or Draco? Cause wow *fans self* awww he's staying the night! Ah I'm tingly now lol
Had my hopes all types of crushed from seeing the double chapters.
(The whole time I read this chapter, if I wasn't eating uo the smut, I was beating on my bed going "why, neville, WHY, NEVILLE. DAMMIT " -cackles- please continue, I'm so ready for this drama right here!!
MzPearlz
Re: Chapter 17
Ooh, nice new twist.
(And you are aware, I assume, that you posted the chapter twice?)
Double post! This was fun! Ugh I am curious to see how Neville plays this out. Maybe it's a push for him in the right direction more towards his life than actually Hermione. Waymay and yourself are awesome and we love you both for all the effort and time you put into this.
Loving this!! I'm all caught up and am definitely going crazy for the next chapter!!
So sad I thought this was a double chapter update lol. Love where the story is heading, you're using Neville wonderfully!
Kudos to you and WayMay for that giggle! A part of me does indeed feel badly for Poor Neville, but the other part is laughing as I would at a good tv comedy plot. It was like watching a train wreck happening. lol I am really glad Draco agreed and that Hermione's dessert ploy was working, even if she didn't know it. I hope they get to finish their scenario in the next chapter (which I thank you for posting already!) before the proverbial shit hits the fan. tee hee hee Thank you!! HG4eva
Their separate revelations were fun to read, but her time with Ginny was fabulous! That was one of the best "girls' nights" and a beautiful picture of real friendship between them. :-) Then the date... so cute. His aggravation at her persistence in labling them, that was fun, too. I liked that they are both all in and look forward to seeing the upcoming storm, because that secret is so not getting kept. lol And finally, Neville... poor boy is about to get the shock of his young life. lol I thank you for updating again and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
RE: Chapter 16
What's in the box, what's in the box!!!??!?!
(I'm guessing pictures)
Bad longbottom! Wrenches the Wrenches are coming, ugh what could that mean for the now happy couple...Gahanna but I love it. Your both killing and making me happy. Tis lovely
oh my god you cant!!!!! Hermione would never survive the humiliation of neville seeing those photos! Please please please let there be some sort of calamity that distracts him from opening those! ill be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.
I'm getting a little bit addicted to this story. Your lemonade is sweet, my friend.
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