I've actually never had a food fight (mud, sand yes). But this was cute. 

Ah, very nice bit there.  Now there's but one thing left.^_^

MMMMMMMM YAAAAAASSSSS. This was good, this was very good. I approve whole heartedly. I feel bad for Neville... will we get to see him with anyone else?

Yummy yummy lemons :3

-MzPearlz

I need to get better at drawing....I very much wanna make sketches of these ugh! Love this chapter. You guys are doing awesome!

I didn't see that coming and I loved every second of it. :-) His thoughts as he fought to maintain control of himself were hysterical, and I am glad he was able to ignore the prejudice words that flitted through. I did shake my head at his comment about not telling his father he'd written to muggles. Kind of sad that he still cares what his father thinks at this point, but I am glad he's getting over it. I also liked that he got 2 things from his desire list. :-)  Neville... poor guy, but she was right to be up front with him and I am glad he took it well.  I look forward to another week of work and watching him try to meld his two selves. Hermione really seemed to enjoy herself and it was interesting seeing her let go so much. I didn't picture her to be so vocal, but I loved it. lol  Thank you again! HG4eva

your stories play like a movie in my head. I can picture everything perfectly and its such a testament to your writing not just in this story but in your others as well! Also the number of times I check to see if you have put up the next chapter yet in the evenings is embarassing. I use it to keep me motivated, like if i get X amount done then i will let myself check...again :)

I'm in love with this story!!!! 

It's hilariously witty, and so well written. Though, wasn't really a fan of the whole Neville/Draco triangle. Will cho be making another appearance? I'm curious to know how that will develop. I hope the children don't give Draco a hard time about his past...

I'm so ready for this lemoney goodness! 

Bring on the Tangy!

‹MzPearlz

RE: Chapter 10.

The plot thickens, and I like it.^_^

It is becoming quite the ridiculous obessesion I have with this story. lol Each evening I wait for the alert to come and everytime I smile like an idiot, as if you'd sent me a present. ha ha ha But, having said that, I do appreciate your story and your updates, so thank you. :-)  I loved the Cho idea, almost as much as Hermione and Draco's quiet but lovely date. I liked that he didn't pull back from showing he was with her in front of her friends (yay for growth!) and that he stood up for her. I want to smack Ron about the head for outing him like that and I hope the students don't turn on him completely. Sigh... Thank you for putting the friends all back in one place and as friends. :-)  So, who is Neville going to fall for now? He is so sweet and deserves happiness and love, just not with her. And, finally... what will he choose? Looking forward to finding out! Thanks, HG4eva

I love all the sexual tension in thsi story. Looking forward to what Draco will choose.

Messy origami  indeed! Ha but it was soft and sweet and I loved seeing Draco behind the mask. But that tension you could cut with a knife. Ugh love it! Looking forward to the lemon zest to come! 

Such a wonderful chapter!! Really enjoying this story! 

Love the story! Please keep writing!

Neville and Draco ripping at one another like 13-year olds, was fun and funny. I thought she was going to call off both dates for a minute there. lol I am glad Neville was okay with them going as friends, just to not spend it alone. I get that completely and their date was relaxed (minus the caffeine overload) and nice.  Draco is sure cocky for someoone so out of his depths. lol I did like his date though. It was romantic, honest, and lovely. I am glad he was honest with her about his life a bit more. The tickling was a good giggle break. :-) I loved seeing your Ginny and I hope she appears again. Her bubbly attitude may come in handy. lol  I am also looking forward to seeing your Ron, as I look forward to his reaction to Draco and Neville's interest, as well as her teaching a subject he finds so taboo.  This should be fun! Thank you and your editor for another fun chapter! HG4eva