Reviews for Anyone On The Line?By : Severus1snape |
Fancy gay club huh? Can't wait :)
lane
Just found this site and your story. First one I've read on this site. I'm a long time reader on Fan fiction.net. I'm surprised at how well everyone is taking Harry and Lucius connecting or planning on connecting. Get a kick out of Dudley in wizarding world after the way HHhe and Harry were as little boys. Harry is an angel for forgiving him and Dudley has courage for even approaching Harry.
Oh, I. Ant wait for chapter 5, and all the fun at the club😁
Oh dear lord no, not Ron's voice. How about Draco's voice after a few drinks. Lol
Sio, what did luscious Lucius say, hmmmmm?
Nharrg.
*Mops up puddle of drool on keyboard*
That was hot! Now I have to go write about Harry and Lucius and Dittany paste.
Um... So minor spoiler. But you probably already saw that coming.
Anywho, very hot, and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter! I'll be checking back every time I get a second to think. (Which might not be very often during August, but we'll see.)
Oh my god that was unbelievably hot!
lane
Whew! Bloody hell, that was hot!
This story, I must admit, has become a highlight of my days when I see updates. First chapter felt a bit dull at first, but it was only the first and I didn't want to give up on the potential, as I've seen a lot of your stories and have fallen madly in love with your writing, so I kept reading, and the second chapter definitely caught my attention. And now, I'm hooked on your writing once more. So please, do keep writing, because it's rare these days to find a writer who makes good stories, which are also so well written and so intriguing. Thank you for sharing your talent with us all.
Omg! That was HOT! You seriously write some of the hottest scenes. I love them all. I can't wait for more.
Oh a little thing tho.....I think that you meant for harry to be exCited and not exited. :)
-lovey_reader
I have never shipped these two before because the characters in fanfics feel forced and it gets straight into the "yeah, we are a lovely couple" but I am going to give this a chance (partly because I would miss you too much if I didnt read it...) I get the feeling my feelings about the relationship will grow alongside Harry's.
Love you, look forward to reading this new one. And keep us updated on the baby!
Mhmm well while I still can't get over the whole Malfoy with a phone thing, this could be fun, you've got me intrigued! And Harry hAnst anyone taught you not to drunk text 😂
lane
Very fun plot line, keep it up please!
Such a Griffindor! Lol
I'm fairly certain I've read something of yours before... But then again, I'm a lurker most of the time, so I might have kept silent, haha. But I AM enjoying this, so keep it up.
And NAUGHTY Harry, sending dirty pictures already! ^_^ Love it!
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