Reviews for Anyone On The Line?By : Severus1snape |
Plzzz plzzz update soon plzzz plzzz I love this book
Omg I love love love this. I can't wait for more. Thank you
Aaaaaah!!! I just read all 16 chapters! They have delighted me and made me giggle throughout the couple of days I progressed through your chapters, and I am SO eager for more!!! Thank you for continuing to write this! Lucius/Harry fics where Lucius isn't magically turned into a sweet hearted "good guy" devoid of Canon characterization and flaws are hard to find these days. I want the grittiness of the fact that he's not a good person, but he can have good traits and treat different people differently depending on circumstance and how much he values them. Your Lucius certainly skirts over his darkest parts, but I am enjoying this fic very much regardless!
I was lol'ing at Harry trying to make Lucius run into his arms via jealousy. Very teenage, which is appropriate. Lucius was a death eater--he had to control himself through a lot of shit worse than seeing a maybe romantic interest noodling about like a horny teenager!
I'm really enjoying this. :) Do you publish fic on Ao3? That's where I usually am.
Omg~ you updated! And I missed it >< damn... Ah well. I really look forward to reading more. ^°^
Yes! Let the courting begin! Can't wait to see what Harry's gonna send Lucius as his first courting gift, please update chapter 17 soon.
CH16 - Ysy for Draco sorting out Harry. Not sure how well courting is going to go, but it's better than sitting around feeling sorry for yourself! SP
ok I finally read it and I like !!!!! poor harry , man malfoy is being an ass ok !!!! so let's see what happens now with the courting !!!:):):)
I wonder if Draco would be so willing to help if he knew it was his father Harry is after? I can't wait to see where this goes.
So this was a ship I hadn't looked into before. I might revisit them again. Very good story. Super steamy and sexy, though appears unfinished at 15 chapters?
CH15 - Well that was a hot ending! Lovely smut. SP
I wonder if it's truly a good idea for Harry to be with Draco? I can't wait to see what happens next in chapter 15 😉
I can see this all going very horribly wrong, and I really don't want it to! SP
This is awesome, i am so happy I read it. Please continue soon, i am SO waiting on pins and needles to see the outcome of this jealousy game!!
Just devoured this to the end of chapter 13 - ridiculously hot! Please update when you can, as this is great! SP
Lol, Harry's so evil, please update chapter 12 soon.
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