ha! love the "my father would hear about it" line. 

Waiting for next chapter, hopefully real 22 because now it's copy of 21.

Great story, really hope she is no longer pregnant with Snape's child. Can't wait to read what's next!

I'm pretty disappointed that this is ostensibly a Draco/Hermione story, and yet Hermione is involved with Snape, Lucius, and apparently has now been given to Lupin without her consent, not to mention the forced pregnancy from Snape.

First, I want to say that you are an amazing writer, your stories have me hooked and you have a wonderful way to describe your characters and their emotions (all the angst, the doubts, the hurt, omg! I can feel them and sympathise with all of them).

So, don´t take this the wrong way, I love this fic, but this chapter made me really sad, and not only because Severus dies, but for the future you are giving to Hermione.

In Chapter 7, when Lucius is there to learn how to punish Hermione, she told him that she wants Severus to keep doing it, and Severus (very wisely) told her that “it wouldn’t look right to have the wife of a Malfoy going to another man numerous times a week”, however, in this chapter Severus goes and make Remus take his place (without Hermione having a word in that).

So, that makes me sad, because so far Draco´s love it´s unrequired (Chapter 18 is so wonderful, so raw with his emotions), and Hermione cares for him, in her own way, but I can see that they would never have a happy live together. How can they if she now was going to need someone else to live? And she´s going to have Severus baby, and probably at some point a baby with Remus (you said it: he have an animalistic instinct and he would probably want a baby to demonstrate that he´s her dominant, and now that Tonks is dead he would need a mate).

And I don´t think that Draco is going to be happy about that… He´s a proud man, who don´t like to share (Chapter 3 comes to mind), but who accepted Severus because he´s part of the family and because I think that he thought the same as Severus in Chapter 7, and that at one point he was sure that he can be that Dom to Hermione (I was a little mad and disappointed when Severus wrote that Draco was too weak for the job). How Draco it´s going to accept Remus in their lives? I don´t think he would, and I really don´t think that he can love Hermione so unconditionally to allow that without become bitter and resentful at some point (In my mind I can´t see Draco saying something like “Go my love, fuck the werewolf and return to me so we can make sweet love”, gag noise), and that would not be fair to her (and I want a happy ending for God´s sake, she deserve one and Draco too!)

Now she´s forced in a relationship with Remus, and so far she hasn´t express her feelings for Draco and maybe she can never would learn if she can love him (omg, you are not going to believe me but I´m about to cry, dam this PMS! And dam your wonderful writing). That would hint you that I´m a Dramione to the core, but in this case I would have preferred if this story was a Severus/Hermione (without Severus dying obviously) than the sad future that so far I can see for my favourite couple.

I love this story, but it´s going to be hard for me to keep reading with all this thoughts in mind. I would not beg you to change your story (I´m tempted, but would not do it), it´s yours and you are doing a wonderful work but please forgive me if at some point I can´t continue this journey with you.

Lots of love                                                                                                 

Ines

PD Please forgive my English, it´s not my maternal language and in that note, please forgive me for a review so large and so full of ramblings.

Please please please let Snape be alive...... And end up with Hermione....... Please

Snape should live and I think there should be a twist in the reson that Remus bit  her.

Hemofpellenor

You've woven a fascinating, satisfyingly complex story with so many threads weaving in and out at once. I love it!

Love this story, Lupin should go to Malfoy Manor he is traveling with the boys, Bella and Hermione should torture Lupin in a separate cell away from Harry and Ron, Hermione can tell him why it's his fault she is where she is, it would break him to know it was his fault. Her identity should be kept from Ron and Harry as she is playing both sides is she not?  Haha happy writing ❤️

I think it would great revenge for her friends who left her to see her with draco with the malfoys and deatbeaters as her allies, lupin should come since he is the reason they left her behind...maybe have hermione "punish" him as ordered by the dark lord. curious does draco only punish her now? does snape have feelings for hermione as well? I think her.ione should take a dark turn...she did kill molly. I have to admit a few chapters were hard to follow but it was worth it to stink with this, def a great story! if you find a spot you should throw in public sex with draco and hermione (possible snape ) to enterain thr death eaters. ;)

Yes Lupin should go to Malfoy manor with Harry and Ron

No they shouldn't recognize Hermione but maybe Lupin could smell her or something.

no, don't kill Lupin. I like him for the most part.

I think Lupin should take Dobby's place (and death)at the manor, and Hermione should be there but not recognized yet. Maybe she could be the one to throw the knife and hit Lupin?