Reviews for A B C,1 2 3By : Blackkitten23 |
I love Doc! He is awesome, but even more so do I love Harry and of course Severus they are just too cute together. I am glad Remus is on the good side.
thanks for writing and sharing the story!
I feel sorry for Harry for having such a horrible childhood, Lily and James are the worst! And I hate them and of course Sirius! He's the same kind of person that his friends! I'm glad Harry would be very happy with Severus!! They are so cute when they're flirting with each other!! Hejeje I hope you could post the next chapter soon!!!
Truly hate the Potter's in this story along with Sirius! So glad Remus is free of them.
Was that Doc's family? Please update chapter 7 soon.
OOOOH NOW EVERYTHING MAKES SENSE!!!! But seriously? The Potters here are utter bastards (except for Harry and the other two kids (can't judge them yet seeing that I don't know their stories~~)) and I can't wait until litle Draco and Remus sees Severus.... Wonder if Remus could smell Harry on Sev...? (wanted to review in ff.net but I found this in aff first so whatevs? XD)
Oooh this is not going to be a pleasant conversation.
Now here's an unusal story! Can it be that James and Lily Potter are going to be evil?? Severus' friend or crush Lily?? Well, well, well.
For doing what they did to Harry, I can't wait to see what Severus will do to the potters, please update chapter 5 soon😃
Harry,Harry,Harry, your both hopeless, I can't wait til one of them(more then likely Harry) finally ask the other out. Surfing? Can Harry get any more yummier? Please update chapter 4 soon!
Oh I loved the new chapter my love.
All I can say is I absolutely loved it. I am so happy right now. I would hug you if I could. This was awesome.
Wow! A fresh character that I even like. I usually don't like OC's. Hoping for more chapters soon.
please keep up the good work!!
Indeed Severus can not say no, please update chapter 3 soon.
Oh, please update chapter 2 soon, I can't wait to see whom this drop dead gorgeous blonde man is.
Great start can't wait to meet the "drop dead gorgeous man"
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