What a beautiful love story! YES, even bad Snape was HAF!!!!

I loved Luna's involvement in this one. Snape was thowing off a "hot sex terminator" vibe throughout the entire story keeping me slightly aroused the whole time. Witty, engaging, great plot twist. Cheers!

Ots coll

I loved this ending. Sexually aggressive Hermione is a badass. I wish I had some wolf blood in me. The added strength would be useful for keeping guys in line and moving furniture.

Fav lines all in a row.

"The moon seemed to follow them, like a glowing balloon on an invisible string,"

"tapping out an urgent rhythm that only added to the mounting tension that seemed to twine around every fibre of their bodies."

"she slammed him against the wall with the palm of only one hand"

"a low vibration rolling exquisitely around the back of her throat"

"He inhaled deeply as he ran the tip of his nose down the curve of her neck. “This is all mine,” he whispered against her, slithering his palm over her breast, down her abdomen to her pussy, where his fingers burrowed through her bush into her molten channel, drawing a shuddery moan from the recesses of her throat."

"He loved all of it—her deliciously swelling pearl, warm creamy tunnel and that tight musky opening that she didn’t often let him near but tonight she would. Tonight she’d want him to give it a lot of attention. In fact, she’d demand it."

"And so he firmed his tongue and used it to ream the margins of her opening"

"But it wasn’t about the sex. This night was a reminder that they had survived; both were still alive. The scars were with them, inside and out, but they were challenging them, defying them, replacing those terrifying memories with new ones—far richer and infinitely more wonderful ones. These nights mattered because they memorialised their joy in being alive . . . and together."

"a fresh surge of arousal drilling into her muscles, making her want to bite him again"

I love the animalistic heat of the whole chapter. Wild and hot--but mixed with heartfelt acceptance And the ending was great. They'll need a big backyard for their pups to run around in.

As always, sad to see the story end, but I'm looking forward to whatever you decide to do next.

Trying again to review...here goes. From that first line.....He found her tits mesmerising....I thought...Get your coat Ali....you've been pulled! Seriously wicked story you should be very proud of.  Word perfect from start to finish and it's been a while since I've been greedily anticipating chapters of an HP fanfic. But alas it has ended and so with a sulk and a pout....Thank you. Best wishes,Love Ali xxxx

I enjoyed this immensely 

I love this ending, it is soooo .... them <3

"Warts and all" - this made me giggle. Wouldn't the "fur and all" be a better phrase? Well, warts or fur -  it made me melt. 

I am truly sorry to see this story ends :'( But I do hope that you will write something new soon and I can't wait ^_^

"might need to borrow her again for that" - you can borrow her any time you like ;)

"Congratulations on finishing your story – where have you posted it?" - Thank you :* I didn't post my story yet, it s with my beta atm I'm waiting for her to send me back fixed version (I wanted to finish it completely before sending it to her since I tend to backtrack and change bits and pieces along the way).

 To be honest I have no idea where to post it save from my blog (which I can't link here since it is wordpress, or I don't know how :/ ). My story is AU and not a sex story, not even a love story, it is a bit of a m/m tease (but just that a tease) so not sure if I can post it on this site. And since I'm fairly new in this (not writing but posting my stories publicly, eternally insecure in my skills - it took ages for my friends to convince me to make a blog and post there some of my short stories ) I'm bit lost at what to do or how this sites work :/. On my profile you have my FB link, so if you have any idea you can drop me a suggestion, I would appreciate it ;)

Waiting for your next work of art with impatience. X

He could be like "HA bitch, IM ALIVE" :3 but anyways. Cool beans. Very very flexible.  Hmm. This should help in later smut right? :3

Someone's a copy cat (parsons, not you) pig form or snake face  x3......anywayyy.....Gotta keep reading, 

That piece of incompetent shit. What the hell. See. Yo...why? And now I must read on.

I am pleased, very pleased. .........  As soon as you said full moon I knew it. But anyway. Funny literary devices there x3

Meant to say last chapter, but who doesn't like a smart guy who doesn't constantly brag about his winnings? But noooo, no suicide missions. And that's why we haven't seen the dragons. Makes sense. Though he doesn't and I wanna bop him like soccer* boppers. Or with those things. Yea. :D

Luna has jokes, doesn't she? And I was dying when I saw that "blonde" in his arms. Like, where the hell would he find another woman at, out in the mountains? Blonde hair does not blend in with mountainy environments  (I don't think, but anyway) She should chug the potion.  And. Dragons that eat their victims inside out... why have they not found one yet?

..hmm..

Mmm bonding. Yup. She's gunna get the D and take the potion, hopefully in reverse order. I am ready. XD 

Back again!! Yuuuummm so many chapters to devor (I hope there's more smut) anyway! Good job keeping the story up and going x3 its so refreshing to have something to read. Hm. Hermione must be really out of it to not know what the potion contained xD. Poor Draco, seems like the only thing he has going for him against Sev right now, is no emotional issues xD