Sorry for late reply, real life and work got me by the throat :)
I love this chapter, so soft and playful. New Hermione is...fun :D And Malfoy, mischievous! Fantastic :)

You can keep her untill the end of this month, I won't have much time to write. I did manage to finish my story in past few days (don't ask when I slept) so no more writing for a while. 

I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. 

Some great development here and loved how you have tied up a few loose ends. I must admit I'm not sure how I would cope with my new beau having shagged his way through most of Wizarding Britain. Still....think Annette Bening and Warren Beatty. Also I absolutely abhor smoking. Daughter of chain smoking parents and Manc hubby now an ex-smoker, buuuuuuuuuut I have to admit there is something infinitely sexy, arrogant and even acceptable about Sev smoking. Goes against the grain but there you are. Also more appropriately Draco should have said....Where there is a will(y) there is a way. Yes? Especially as a willy was required to make the potion. Lastly is Hermione wanting her meat rawer these days? Does that mean rough, dirrrty sex au naturel? Oh go on then...count me in. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Yeeeeees! Excellent chapter. I love wolfmione, and sarcastic Severus was great. I take it things are going to get "wild" in the next chapter. (Wolfie-style is the full moon version of doggie.)

Great wrap up in this chapter too. I like the way you tied everything together. 

Fav line: a single eyebrow cocked to indicate he suspected she had a screw loose.

(Fixes: Separate the statement from the question with a comma in . . . 

You do know what’s happening tonight don’t you?

We won’t be late will we?

I was led to believe it was an Amory potion. It wasn’t was it?

And you've got a rogue ending quotation mark on the gap in the cupboards.”

Side note--I'm so glad I'm not the only one who does this.)

Ahhhhhh. Wandless magic. Now I get it. I thought you were saying she was so flexible she had somehow swapped them physically. Contortionist Hermione.

I'm glad Parsons is all knocked out and mummified. That's what he gets. But I'm with Snape; they should turn him into dragon chow.

I love how they've switched places since the start (Hermione helped him when he got hurt in the beginning and now he's the one helping her.) Is he going to talk to her about his issues regarding Lily (or does she already know)?

They've switched places in other ways too. New Hermione is brimming with slutty fun just like Snape. They go well together now. Fav line: topped only by the sensation of his silken cock, bobbing gently against the cleft of her buttocks.

And of course I loved the waterfall sex and Luna's ending line.

I could use a thorough hug myself.

What can I say? That was lovely and Hermione was right to take a good memory from the gorgeous Scottish landscape. It really is magical...though I have a very soft spot for the Lake District too. Loved the fact that Sev quite rightly acknowledged the oil and water mix of a stiffy and cold water. I really have enjoyed this delicious little tale and hope that we have a bit more to look forward to. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

YES!!! New chapter! <3
And I like the beginning, slow and somehow relaxing after thrill and tension of previous chapters. I like how you described tenderness between them ^_^

“I’ll wait for the explanation.” - you and me both ;)

I just love that little witty small talk about what to do with amorous werewolf - their former boss. It would be a world of fun to explain how exactly he came to be do enchanted with Snape :D And OFC!, some more of show off, not so much intentional this time tho :)

Waterfall sex, so hot (and cold), bit of a cliche but that really goes to the category of "oldie but goodie" ;) Especially with "New Hermione" in the mix, I like that "new" one.

"“I wanted to come back here because . . . because I thought it might be our last opportunity to . . . to do it.” “What do you mean?” he frowned, stopping mid-thrust. “I just . . . I don’t know your plans.” She shook her head. He considered her for a long moment before resuming. “I don’t have any plans. You fucked up the last lot.”"  - I know long quotation, sorry about that, but this part made me feel giddy. I LOVE IT! If I wasn't hooked on the story by now - that one would be the deal breaker for sure.

“Well, my dear, that’s certainly the most thorough hug I’ve seen in a while.” - Indeed! Perfect cliffhanger ending as always, and with Luna to boot ^_^

She helped a lot :) - I'm glad to hear that :) Since my work keeps me too preoccupied and doesn't leave me much time for writing, I think I'll let her stay with you for a while loner then :)

Waiting a new chapter with impatience <3 

Briliant! Briliant!! Briliant!!!

I ADORE this chapter! Thank you! <3 ^_^

"She’d done it. The potion swap had gone seemingly unnoticed. Belittling Severus had been a risky diversion..." - so miss perfect is proficient in wandless and wordless magic, no big surprise and again, that is some nice skill she has :)

"He might, like her, be feverishly churning through ideas on how to escape. Or he may have simply given up." - such lovely description of them, they don't know each other, and strong feelings are by no means enough in this situation.They just tap dance in the dark and hope to do the right thin and not lose each other in process. In the same time they are willing to save each other but themselves. Soooo sweet <3

"She’d pretended that she’d come through it all—that she’d coped, her disapproving, and admittedly sometimes brittle, demeanour hiding a world of hurt." - I love this! It ives reality and dimension to the story I really appreciate. This is perfectly captured post war reality.

"she became aware that she wasn’t the only one fixated upon him" - hahahahahahaha. Simply brilliant. Tsk, tsk, tsk who would say that Mr. Parsons would turn on HIM, not that I can blame him but that was a bit of a nasty surprise for her plan :D

OK, blod licking (juck) and sexy Severus (well sexsier) and horny in love werewolf - I was grosed up, amused and had all kind of wrong/right ideal all at once. Fantastic! 

"And then Severus kissed him. A ‘Liverpool Kiss.’" - you just gave me a heart attack!, until I realised the line beneath. For one second my mind was screaming: nooooo, wrong werewolf (no offence I do lean toward that particular paring - well sort of).

"Finally he lunged forward, crushing his boot against her head." - well revenge can be cathartic! Now they just have to fight through army of beasts. At this point I have to join chorus that calls for Luna's assistance and her brittle line of thinking.

I have to admit, shorter chapters but with less time between them are very appealing. I don't know if you rite and poste or if you have already written whole peace, but I prefer to finish all before posting. If you write nd post this tempo can be demanding for you, even if it's preferable for us (readers). Nevertheless, this is much more merciful to readers nerves, I have only 2 knuckles chewed now.

Just keep posting chapters as soon as you can. I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting to see how situation is going to develope. <3

Just in case, I'm sending you my muse as support in hope to see new chapter soon ;) <3 

Ding dong, the snake is dead! Now they just need to kill Parsons (and blow up the caves or something). 

And did I miss something? How the hell did Hermione switch the potions if she's chained to the wall? (Maybe I'm imagining too much distance between her and the table, but even then I'm baffled by the logistics.)

Despite my potion-switching confusion, I absolutely loved this chapter. I agree with the reviewer who said you write action very well. (But what don't you write well?) I can't wait to see how you conclude this (and they'd better engage in some first-aid fucking when it's all over).

8P~ <-----Debaucery face with pube stuck on tongue.

Yes....yes......yessssssssss!! A la When Harry Met Sally. A Liverpool Kiss.....aka a Glesca Kiss (from Glasgow) but a Cokeworth Kiss.....even better. Way to go Sev. Perfectly executed scenario my dear and quite literally in Shika's case. I'm getting a bit worried though. Are your quick updates heralding the end of this magnificent tale? I sincerely hope not. Let us hope that it will be "Book 'em Luna" and our intrepid were-bastard vanquishers can get back to what they do best......shagging! But hopefully with some emotion attached this time. I mean it could be time to teach him how to make love and not just fuck!

Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx.

PS......Coniston/Grizedale...our static caravan is on the Coniston Old Man (a mountain) side and we look across to Brantwood and part of the perimeter of the Grizedale Forest. But yes the sculptures are good.

I might have thrown up in my mouth a little bit during the *gag* blood-licking. When they get out this mess, they'd better head back that waterfall... and get nekkid.

I'll try to pick some words not used yet.... they might be lame, though. Tantalize + aroused = Tantaroused.... arantalize? Er... arousalized? Ack. Terrible.

Next attempt: tease + libidinous = libidinease. Ugh.

Uh... Tantalize + wanton = wantalize. Ick.

Yeah, I'm no good at this. I'll leave the sexy word mash-ups to the pros.

Oh crap, I didn't catch the bottle switch the first time around. What's worse: werewolf Parsons or horny Parsons? (Assuming that the lycanthropic potion wears off first...)

Ok..ok....has Sev somehow doctored the stuff Parsons is just about to drink?  Is it somehow Hermione's lust potion? Secondly did I miss something? How did Parsons know what happened between them in the Den? Anywhoo...whatever....you are able to write plot and action incredibly well, clear and concise.  It is very enjoyable. Almost as enjoyable as your "naughtiness". So please let's resume normal order, stop tormenting my fragile BP and get back them back to safety and the....ahem....smut. Pretty please?!

Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxxx

"I won't ;) <3" Thank you, this is a real thriller chapter and I love it! <3

I'll start on the spot I skipped out last time.
Mr.Parsons - fantastic, I really didn't see that coming, but when I think about it it does have logic. But I was ready to dismiss his blatant shuning of her reports as petty jealousy.

"Your wand. Now" - ok that's Snape, wordles and I'd say wandless magic is not a problem for him. At least as "first aid" if needed be. 

Why do I have feeling with all his careful planning he still underestimated Snape as well as Hermione? Mr Parsons also seems to have big holes in his carefully gathered knowledge of those two. For all his planing he missed few key details, especially with Hermione. First one would be she is lioness, in pack females are the hunters that provide food ;) .

Snake? Auch. But honestly, for the man who lived trough that much...pushing through his fear is not easy but not impossible, especially with a strong motive and more than a little adrenaline. Mistake No2 on Mr. Parsons plan. 

And what a marvelous plan! Make him fight again for someone who doesn't want to have anything with him. Doesn't history should teach us not to repeat same mistakes? And luckily wizarding world never heard of Lassie :D

"Blue bottle".... oooh nooo, it can't be that easy! Please, tell me it is not what I think it is? :D

You mastered the cliffhanger endings by now >.<
I hope to see new chapter soon *back to chewing fingers and clawing the walls* ^_^

Uh oh. His little side-job came back to bite him on the ass. Literally.

Continue on, O Purveyor of Perversion, Perplexity & Provocation!

Gaaaaah! You're killing me. This bounty of cliffies is maddening.

Excellent chapter. The writing was great and the imagery was terrifyingly tense. Giant fucking snakes and narcissistic murderous werewolves--how delightfully evil. Once again you had me too caught up in the action to take decent notes. But I did get "pursed together like a pair of folded inner tubes." A disgusting simile, but a triumph of descriptive writing.

(You must be so proud?--Use a period.)

I don't know how they're going to get out of this (but I hope Luna returns with some backup to save the day). I can't wait for the next chapter. 8P` ` ` <----Rabidly drooling Debaucery face.