Reviews for EmpireBy : waymay & Alcoholic_Rootbeer |
This story is a delight on so many levels. I'm especially enjoying the interplay between Draco and Hermione and all of Hermione's actions to put Ron in his place after years of frustration with his idiocy. The intrigue about the embezzlement from Draco's companies adds a new layer of interest that's very satisfying. I am eager to read more.
Oh this was so funny, riling up Ron. I never cared for the 'ninny'.
Must. Have. More.
IT's either Astoria or could it be Ron and George?
Even though there was no meeting between the two, I liked how you got them to realize they might have feelings for the other. :-) I laughed out loud at Draco have to court Blaise's mother to get back his friend. And, I enjoyed Draco tricked Madoff. Beautifully done! Thank you, HG4eva
I never liked Rin he's immature and inconsiderate.
Brandy isn't a word they use in the UK.
But other than that it's a hoot.
The back and forth in time were well done! I laughed out loud at her drunken antics and his reactions to them. I had forgotten about Ron and George, too, so when she remembered and went back, I winced. lol Poor guys. I think her guilt played into her anger, but I hope Ron heard some of what she said, because she wasn't wrong, even if she was wrong. Thanks again!! HG4eva
Just read chapter 2! I would have read all of them in one sitting, but this weekend had me so busy. Just wanted to say that Chapter 2 was just as amazing! Keep the momentum going. :)
Great fic. Keep up the awesome work.
You guys got an out loud laugh at the wheelbarrow! Thank you. That was fun. Draco's initial panic over her visit made me giggle, too! Thank you!! HG4eva
A very unique concept for these kinds of fan fic. I love it, and the characters are really well written. Great job, and I hope to see more updates soon!
PS: the french "accent" was AMAZING. I was giggling the entire time.
Holy crap -This fic is hilariously awesome! Everyone is in character and so cleverly written! I can't wait to read chapter 2. :)
Thank you once again. :-) His life of utter failure and hopelessness, next to hers of optimism and hope is intriguing. I look forward to more really soon! HG4eva
waymay & Mr. Benzedrine are amazing! I want to read more!!
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