Reviews for PitchBy : Alcoholic_Rootbeer |
Romantic. Enjoyable. Much better ending to HP than Hermione and Ron (which never made sense)
This was wonderful x3 The fluff wasn't overpowering.. which is awesome! Very well written, my dear. Write some more in the future, alright?
This was simply amazing! I absolutely loved it!
What an interesting way to get them together. The pitch seems a great way to burn off some adreneline. Nicely done.
t-w-o
Loved it! Very cute, and very "Draco"--such a delightfully conniving man!
I love this!
I see the correlation between this fic and WayMay's Empire fic! I know you guys work together, and it's awesome seeing some overlaps between your stories. Keep up the amazing work. Love your writing.
That was awesome. Take it and run with with it. Make it a multi chapter.
Really loved this. You have the ability to write Draco in so many ways and make it still believably him! So talented!
Loved it. His desire, angst, lust, and love all together where great to read. I also loved that he completely missed that she must have been interested from the beginning if she followed him and then went into the lockers with him. lol Another lovely job! Thank you! HG4eva
I absolutely love this one shot. Can you add even two or three more chapters?
Excellent story. Reading over this in one sitting(as opposed to Sex Ed) proves that while you do write good smut, you really shine when it comes to plotting, character dynamics and dialogue. Take a bow, m'lady.
Just further telling you how much I loved this. I actually loved the whole word play in the begining with mud...I'm trash I know shhh lol
That was so sweet. I liked it. Your oneshots are always awesome but I always wish that they would be more. But thank you anyways for sharing.
I like.
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