Reviews for A Week in NovemberBy : TempestLore |
Sorry that I haven't review on the other two chapters, but you got me with the fruit eating. I think I woke up my roomie because of that xD. This is great!!! I love the gradual build up to her memories. At first I was confused but this is great!!
O.M.G! I wasn't expecting that. Update please!
I just wonder what if the little girl is Hermione & Draco 's daughter. Draco performed a paternity test,not maternity test. Janet was Hermione's healer. She delivered their son.Maybe they had twins. Maybe she had hidden their daughter & kept her in such bad condition,to take revenge & advantage.Edmund & Effie are both four year old.
This story is amazing!! I have been so enthralled by your story.
I believe the daughter goes to Lucius not Draco
wonder if Luc is aware
Romantic chapter.But I just don't like Jannet.She is creating so much turmoil in Draco & Hermione's beautiful world. I guess Jannet has something to do with Edmund turning into a vampire.Just put an end to her story.She deserves to be punished for making Hermione loose her memory,trying to steal her husband & (I guess) attempting to hurt her son. I wish Draco & Hermione have more romance in the subsequent chapters :)
love this story please update soon
Another review! Just because I love this fic <3
I like the Harry and Draco friendship, it makes sense that they would actually get along in the end. And Harry actually doing stuff like erasing the spell from Draco's wand is a good twist in my opinion...because he's always wanted to do the right thing and isn't afraid to sometimes do things outside of the law (I hope I'm making sense here).
Just one comment, and it is something that bothers me in many different fics on this site; why make Ron such an ass? I seem him more the moody type, hot headed and all but couldn't really picture the dude getting head whilst one of his best friends is missing...
Doesn't mean I don't still love the story and the dynamics between the different caracters...still loving it and really looking forward to the next chapters :)
Well written chapter! Waiting for the rest of the story.
So happy he got her out of there. I love Harry and Draco being friends to. UPdate please!
Loving the flash backs. Update please
Tis is good I like it!
Please don't separate Draco & Hermione(even if it's for a short span of time). It's very painful to read.I want to see them happy with each other.Hope this incident only strengthens their bond & the subsequent chapters have more dramione romance!
Great start can't wait to read more.
Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!
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