You're back! With more deliciously annoying back and forth internal dilemmas. You penned down their difficulties perfectly: Snape's concern and irritation at her naïveté; Hermione's misguided martyr marred by her unwilling...enjoyment. I really hope that her "Stop!" means she got there at the same time he did. Pretty please next chapter already begs

Hi Sweetie and so sorry I have joined the party late but better late than never. What a delicious premise you have going on here and a totally realistic one at that. We have a Hermione making things hard for him in more ways than one and a Severus forever regretting his earlier choices in life that have lead both him and Hermione to this unfortunate situation. Oh well .....it's a dirty job having to pleasure the potions master in order to save his crown jewels from a fate worse than death but I'd do it in a heartbeat. Glad you enjoyed your holiday and I now expect you to be chained to the keyboard to give us more. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxxx.

Finally! A new chapter! This brightened my day (if you count 2:30 AM as day).

Welcome back, we missed you XX <3

Sounds like your writing is going well if you are chapters ahead of your beta. - my writing is insane comparing to my betta, she got stuck with her uni so my next chapter is way past his due to post it and I feel guilty to bug her.

I hope your muse enjoyed her time off from me ;) - she maybe did, but she drove me nuts, please take her back, I have to work and she won't let me :D

 The way you described him...sound like my ex, which is usually how I do imagine his built. ^_^

“Why? Do you have a problem with big noses?” - ok I literally fell off my chair from laughter

Let me quote Ron "Bloody hell, she thinks too much."

Less stimulating? That must be a fucking first for the bedroom. / What was she expecting? A spontaneous ejaculation? / “Why is it taking so long?” “Because you keep telling me to stop,” he hissed through gritted teeth. - I just couldn't stop laughing, you are brilliant!

Btw, she irks me to no end! Can I take her place? Can I? *blink, blink*

I'm really glad to see you writing again. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hugs & kisses XoXo

I loved the constant back and forth in this chapter--torn between the unwanted pleasure and the necessary mechanics involved with forced intimacy. You feel horrible for both of them and, at the same time, want to smack them. I think you've captured the conundrum perfectly. I'm desperate for every new chapter, but I'm also cringing the whole time I'm reading.

What was up with the wine high? Is something freaky going on? No, don't tell me. You know I don't want to know yet.

(It was hers after all?--Period.)

(Either could he.--Neither.)

Please keep updating as often as you can! 

Can wait to see how this story develops and how our Hermione's mind may be changed..::

I truly hope you're okay.... I don't normally leave comments, but you've been absent from posting to this story for 10 days.  Either it's serious writer's block, or something else.  Hope to see you back soon!

I like the antagonistic, distrustful dynamics created between Hermione and Severus (possibly Dumbledore as well). It allows lots of rooms to develop (both for plot and character).

The origin of the enchantment, while implying to be likely of Snape, seem to remain an interesting history as well.

Well! I thought: "lucky me, Desert-Dear managed another chapter before leaving..." Ha!

Ohh I can't believe you actually left it there! And went on holiday?! You'll be back god knows when... 

But anyway, I enjoyed the chapter and I'm getting a little more hopeful, that everything will be sexual soon :-)  I liked her discovery of his different side, by checking his room out and "There wasn’t a single entrail in sight" -disbelieve in this line really got me snorting. It just shows, how little we know of others and, really, we see, only what we want to see.

Come back soon

Thank you

Hopeful Fox xx

I knew you weren't going to use Polyjuice, but I couldn't figure out what you were gong to go with; I like the introduction of Histomalleus. (I did go look up what the prefix histo meant in medical terms and I had no idea it meant living body tissue. Malleable body tissue. I think I need that in real life.)

I'll email you my nefarious ideas about appearance fuckery.

Fav line:

"I mean, you’re only just scraping by. No wonder he was so keen to help.”--Hahahahaha!

("And stop talking about bloody Quidditch will you.”--Comma after Quidditch and question mark at the end.)

OMG you wouldn't. You left us with such a cliffhanger! (Loved the use of all those ellipses. To be drawn into that tantalising scene – implying her grudging/growing curiosity about his body – and then left high and dry...) Hope the holiday leaves you refreshed!!

she’s a teenager :)  - true, but somehow I always see her as more mature than her real age ;)

looks like there aren’t that many Dumbledore fans around here - the way I see it, if you like Snape you are almost bound to dislike Dumbledore, Marauders (Remus is partially exception in my case) and (don't hate me) Lily.

Btw, the enchantment stinks more and more like Dumbledore's work. Why? Snape is brilliant but much more "to the point"and he would make some "back door" just as a precaution he does fall in to his own trap. This level of blatant manipulation and pushing everyone to the limit is more Albus's style. Working with Dark Lord closely, Snape knows how easy is to make the madman angry and vindictive, he wouldn't set the trap so that he couldn't wiggle out of it.  

examining his nails in an obvious attempt to ignore her. & Snape huffed before shoving the fingernails he’d been inspecting back under his armpit. - LOVE, LOVE, LOVE this bit :D Btw, who is acting like teenager now? I had a flash of a kid sitting in principals office, playing it cool while scold for something he done :D Brilliant role reversal :)

Sighing, he raised a hand and beckoned his index finger at the pile of books beside her. Instantly the third book from the bottom was ejected, landing directly in front of her as the rest fell back into a neat stack. - I just love this little show-offs of his powersand knowledge <3 

The other major concern was that she had him by the balls. - I have message for her - she's doing it the wrong way *evil, lusty, grin*

I love how you described his quarters :) I also like how well you play with the thin line of love and hate, I'm just waiting for that shaky dam to break.

But her main concern right now was figuring out which was the real Snape (...) Or the one standing before her now . . . slowly . . . taking . . . off . . . his . . . coat. - ohhh, you are fantastic :D

you need to be writing with those fingers, no more chewing! - I could do with less writing, currently I'm 4 or 5 chapters ahead of the girl who's checking my english (still in lack of real beta) and kind of in doubt how good my story really is :/

I don't know when you are going to vacation but I wish you a fun time and plenty of rest :*

Oh I just adore this chapter, it is so misleading, and really forces you to read between the lines. ^_^

Snape at Madam Puddifoot’s! :'D I can imagine him all black and brooding among all that lace and fine china, frowning XD

I can understand her need to know, and to ask questions, but does she has to be so bloody rude?

Yeah, that kind of enchantment does smell like his pedantry work but stinks like Dumbledore's meddling as well. My money is on old meadler. 

“And I want you to understand that this is entirely a business arrangement. There is nothing sexual about it, whatsoever.” - yeah rightttttttttt *smug smile*

Waiting for next chapter, please make it his POV this time ;)
You get me back on chewing my finger off, nails are already gone :) XX

Well I feel better now that they've talked things out. Nothing like a little hostile "tutelage" to open up the floodgates of understanding. I like angry Hermione, and at the same time, I like defensive Severus. I find them both relatable, and I enjoy the ticking time bomb waiting to go off between them. (I've just thought of some real mind fucks that Hermione could inflict on him in the coming "different appearance" chapters. My brain is so warped.)

Fav line: Both charming suggestions-- Bahahahahaha!

(It was a threat wasn’t it--Comma after threat.)

Dear Desert, 

Chapter 5. I swallowed it in minutes! Ha! We've got some action lined up! And there's nothing sexual about it! I like to get some answers :) Exciting times are approaching. And no, I do not trust Albus, I never truly did. Always found him manipulative and secretive.

I also wanted to tell you, that your writing is wonderful and your English is fantastic, perfect wording every time. Apart from excitement and enjoyment, I get English lessons as a byproduct :-) You and Oracle are my two favourite writers here, I found Oracle first, I hope it's not cheating... I know OO reads and reviews all your stories, sooo maybe a little triangle...?

I will miss you during your holiday, but I will be busy reading your other stories, so I'm hoping I'll live through it somehow :-)

Have a lovely holiday, eat and drink a lot, have lots of sex -for inspiration purposes only, of course... or some research for current and future stories ;) and when you come back, I expect some serious chapters.

Thanks

Fox xx

Make more!! PLZ write quicker and more and longer chapters! I love this! Also Snape is really passive in this and i love it. I think they would be a great couple. Like in a hour of snape, it was awesome!