DS,

Yes certain punishments are my kind of thing ;-) It's good to hear from you. I was away from you for 24 days during which you have written 10 chapters. I have no idea how you do it, but following you is a pleasure.

Chapter 23.

Bella is a bit freaky, luckily sexy Lu didn't let her have Hermione brrr... and I hate when she says Sevvy -it's an infuriating abbreviation. I disagree, that Severus is severe, I think it is a very sensual name, to me it sounds like a gentle, passionate sigh. Maybe it's just me, but this is how I see it.

Lucius is clearly beautiful and sexy, I wouldn't kick him out of my bed, but he's also sooo full of himself. When I watch him (read him), in the background I hear Beyonce's "Ego" I would let him fuck me, only if I had ear pluggs to cut out the bullshit (gagging -no good, tongue -essential).

I looove the cock envy -very, very funny. In fact all Hermione's internal comments are hilarious.

I hope Sexy Lu will not develop some kind of obsession over Hermione, he seems to have too much interest in her (for a Mudblood)... a pinch of fascination + a shot of excitement + pint of humiliation and pain and we have a very dangerous, explosive even, mixture... yes?

And, because I'm yours -I've melted, I am a wet puddle... wet...

Thank you

Fox xx

Chapter 22.

I was hoping you'd do something about it.  You never disappoint :) But the shagging party is not over and I'm very curious about the plan. Hermione is too clever not to have one. 

Ok, so I know it's too late now, but I would of course prefer fly on the wall or Lucius POV.

I must go now and read more.

Fox xx 

Chapter 21.

Did I say I was nervous before?  Well, I'm really worried now. 

Poor Severus, that must have been a shock to see her at the door... Poor Hermione, will you force her to have sex with all the Death Eaters?  I know it was "her decision",  but I still hope you will find a way out. Right? 

Also did she use Histomalleus before she arrived?  Please say yes. Ohh you know how to raise hysteria levels in your readers.

Fox xx 

Chapter 20.

OHH FUCK!! Complications are welcomed,  but why Snape must always be turned into a blood-leaking pancake? 

I'm all nervous now. The tension is rising. I love this story. 

And I feel a little sorry for Draco, he's an evil little shit and he tried to rape Hermione,  but then again he's desperate. I think if he was truly vicious he would have done it a long before. Maybe I'm wrong, but I think he runs out of options. 

Fox xx 

Chapter 19.

That was exciting! I knew Draco will make an appearance at some point :)

And then our dark, dangerous and big-cocked hero managed to save her in the last moment -for the time being, at least. 

And "pussy howling for relief" was so funny, I get that a lot, but then it's less funny, of course. 

Fox xx 

Chapter 18.

The masturbation scene was reminiscent of my past as a teenager... Ohh I'm such a sentimentalsod... :)  of course I never had any one watching me - as far as I know. 

Severus and Hermione in this chapter were beautiful together.  He was very open and honest with himself about his feelings on their relationship.  Those feelings, wishes and expectations he has for his future... so sad...

Is it really too much to wish, the poor guy got some happiness in his life for once?

I don't think so, but I suppose it will be a while. 

Fox xx 

Chapter 17 is by far my favorite chapter to date. There's just something so freaking hot about the situation. I've re read it so many times. :)

Let me know how you go with it. - for now it goes good, working on two stories helps (tho my dishes would suggest otherwise)

Possessive Snape returns! - no complaints here, we love possessive Snape ;)

Happy Christmas to you. And ‘no’, do not send your muse to me. - thank you :) and ouch, yeah you writing much faster than usual, this insane creature of mine is gone haywire, making me go back and forth between the stories :/

Chapter in overall is FANTASTIC! I am bit confused tho, where did she had that contraceptive while she was with Snape...only thing that comes to mind is when she hid herself under the covers...

stuffing Lucius’ balls into his filthy, privileged mouth. - ok, I love how descriptive and graphical you are, also I love all the depth that this "little" description carry with it

Even a compliant person wouldn’t put up with that sort of shit. - hahahahahahahaha

Only a man with cock envy would say that. - totally, totally evil *grin around the head*

Poor SEv, doing the math....and pacing :( 

She was one of the bravest people he’d ever known. - I know you captured him well, but, it always hurts to remember how oblivious he is towards himself and his own actions.

Severus was first inside the room. - awwwwwwwwww 

“Because . . . I’m . . . yours.” - I just love this part <3

Waiting for the next chapter, and hopefully it will be something to shoot ours (readers) ripped nerves.  XX

"Because I,m yours" OMG So cute... It was great but the girl inside me it,s just glad this part it,s over in order to watch them cuddle and kiss in front of the chimney. Although I imagine there will be other dilemmas to solve otherwise, it would mean that the story is next to its end and nobody wants that. 

"Because I'm yours." Swoooooooon. So glad for how it turned out *loopy heart eyes*

Chapter 17.

Hot. Seriously hot. 

And another little step closer. 

How many more naughty little (or big) ideas do you possess? 

This chapter got me salivating throughout. This story is getting better and better.

Also, it seems I was right about him following her and protecting her. And they can "meet" more frequently! Ha!

Fox xx

Chapter 16.

Love the chapter, especially how his research notes and McGonagall's remarks on young Severus draw a parallel between his and Hermione's life. So it seems they are more alike than I previously thought.

Ahh... and yesss... a guilt fertilier in action, she'd better go and kiss every square inch of his body, that should make her feel better ;)

I hope that a sexy Loose-use Malfoy will appear soon.

Fox xx

Oh...don't give me choices. I'll have to sit on the fence and let you decide as the creator. I mean I do have a soft spot for Lucius as explained before.........but I am in a relaxed state as I am having a spa day with my daughter tomorrow and am full of zen. Hell no......go for it Lu and let Hermione unleash the dogs of war. I have a golden retriever puppy called Saffie and she is a brute and willing to participate in kicking Death Eater arses. Only kidding.... she is a sweetheart and totally submissive.But as usual I digress. Interestingly enough our puppy's mother was called Bella....think she may be related to Bellatrix? Still very intrigued as to what Hermione is planning. Great stuff as always. Best wishes, Love Ali xxxx. 

Fly on the wall!! Oh mug gah, can't wait to see what you come up with, haha. Give 'em hell, Hermione!

Chapter 15.

Very sexy. Appearing at my lover's door in just a coat and underwear is still on my "to do" list... one day... one day. The whole chapter was amazing, I loved how their relationship evolved. There's one thing I don't understand though, why do they have to do it only once a week, I mean, he needs to satisfy the enchantment by having unprotected sex with one muggle a week -as a minimum, in my understanding... so they could, perhaps, meet up more often??? Or am I just greedy...?

I really liked:

A lint repository  -very funny

Clinging to him like a sloth  -very sweet, I can see it in my mind :-)

And they fell asleep together. Again very sweet and lovely.

Fox xx