I'M SORRY!!! I didn't abandoned you, really. I was crazy busy and then away for Christmas and New Year and now I'm back. I know I'm a very bad Fox, but I will make my shameful behaviour up to you, I promise.

Chapter 14.

I love the opening line with the sausage sandwich -it makes me hungry.

I like how Severus starts to consider her moods and worries and over-thinks the situation. Also how he's watching her back in classes and in corridors. Is he following her? I'm glad she showed him, that she wants him and smirk-hiding is one of my favourite games. 

BUT the highlight of the chapter is Lucius the Pussy Hound his ability is astounding! On a top of that he is so sexy... and this lovely hair... yum. I have a feeling he is going to be a little problem (or a big problem). Not, that it's a bad thing, really. Can't wait :-)

Fox xx

Bah, yes, I forgot about the Histrorules. I didn't know Hermione had wandless capabilities, so I wasn't thinking about her. But when she first got under the covers, I thought she had somehow sneaked her wand in with her (and let them take a fake). I thought she was going to do the transformation before he even started. But I loved the butt balloon. I thought for sure when Lucius dragged her out there naked that Draco was going to say, "Hey, that's not Granger's ass. I should know--I've been staring at it for years."

And now I'm dying to know what she's got up her sleeve, cause I can't figure out any kind of plan. (Which is why I'd be no good in such a situation.) I really have no preference who's POV you use for the coming chapter; but I guess if I flip a coin in my head, I pick Hermione.

Fly on the wall, if I'm not too late. Btw, I love your stories, and really appreciate how quickly you're able to update! 

It,s so sweet seeing Snape caring. I would like Snape,s point of view in the next one. 

"will you write my absence letter? :)" I would only need to send your boss a link of this story, I,m sure he/she will totally understand.

Fly on the wall POV please!!! Hope the next chapter comes out soon!

That was brilliant of her (you)! I would vote for Severus' fly on the wall perspective. :-) Thank you!!

Totally a fly on the wall with L&H

I'm late again :S

I want to blame your muse but she has been going crazy on your story I see! - more than usual, and especially since I'm battling a personal problem, getting rid of bad habit, so I write more than I would, tho I do appear bit OCD when writing

I’m going to need a break after this story (I say that every time)  - I noticed, and I am going to be selfish, no you wont, you gonna think of something else ;)

Chapter 21

Conversation between Hermione and Parvati is so good, and  Parvati's comments...great :)

The look of naked horror that captured his features - ok I really had...if she is near me I'd probably slap her couple of times, I know she's helping but not to give him warning, lovely they are going to fly blind.

One question tho how Lucius can claim anything by the smell? I mean ok he CAN claim but that is more of a hearsay than valid reasoning. I really do expect that old Voldy is setting Lucy out and not Snape. I know I'm meddling now but for me it would be logical, even half crazy Voldy was were composed and logical in his planing (only exeption was opsession with wand).

Chapter 22

“Bring Snape.” - he really is not only arrogant but also gave off tell-a-tell sign what he would do, sadly that is also sign that he believes in his claims

“I believe it’s my turn first.” - hohohoho! Given the opportunity, Lucy is good as dead. He touched something that most definitely isn't his (sorry I'm watching HBP right now).

 Poor Sev, she deserves that he shake her untill that brain of hers starts rattling, and then kiss her...and probably more ;) It's like she is determined to add salt to the wound. I know, I know, she does have some plan (btw brilliant trick with wandless spellcasting) but ... ok let's say that how they going to get out of this mess is how much they trust each other and know each other. 

If he could only spare her—cause a distraction so that she could escape. - yaha...that would work...like...never! What part of she came here to save him is so elusive to him? 

malevolent albino hawk - ok, this made me laugh, and you insulted hawks (just so that  you know).

"Perhaps she just appreciates a big dick," / "As I told you, I've never done her before. But after that, I’m quite confident I’ll be looking to go again.” - ok big, big, mean grin :D

Ok, I can't wait to see what is the plan! And you know me, I'd love Sev's POV, but honestly at this point anyone's POV is welcomed as long as it soon ;) I'm waiting next chapter with anticipation (and trying to get drunk my insane muse - my Christmas is in 3 days and I'm writing instead of preparing - can I sent her to you? ) XX

FML so good!! I'm dying from the story's progression; it's keeping me on the edge of my seat! Can't wait for the next chapter, but meantime, hope you had a wonderful New Years!  

Chapter 13: Ive read it about 6 times now and hot diggety damn it's hot!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG......and Happy New Year to you. I can't keep up with you review wise but I have kept up reading and I am aghast!!!!! She gives him a nice blow job...then get attacked by Draco and now she's sacrificing herself to the Death Eater wolf pack in "order" to keep him safe. Too much excitement for this lass to take but I'll do my best. Lovely, lovely work and thank you so much for these quick updates. Best wishes for 2017 and still loving this story. We have beautiful calm frosty weather here at the moment and going to Coniston tomorrow in the Lake District to check on my boat and caravan.

Best wishes, love Ali xxxxx.  

Re: Chapter 21

As Good Ol' J.R. would say, "Business is about to pick up!"

Ok, so I think a leave of abscence from work is completely justified at this point...haha Of course we understand things slowing down but please, don,t make us suffer for too long! Great work!

Ooooooooo! So much cliffhangy goodness. I'm dying to know how they're going to handle this. Wandless magic? If he casts an unnociteable Histomaleus on her, he can just act like he's never had sex with her before. (Juicy panties can be explained away.) Did I understand Lucius's reasoning correctly--that she needs to be fucked multiple times to prove there's no contraception involved? What, by all of them? That's gonna be a long night. I hope she lubed herself up real good when she was "stretching" before the meet.

Oh and I loved the scene between her and Parvati. A little bit hilarious, a little bit sexy, a little bit girl talk. A bit of lighthearted fun before the fish slap of rape is upon us. Excellent contrast. :)

You are taking it up a level!! 

Sincere thanks for your chapters AND the speed at which you're updating - such a gift to all us readers who are constantly waiting to get the goods on what happens next!! 

Well done!