Reviews for Bonded ConsortBy : Lomonaaeren |
I love this!!! You did such an amazing job with this story. I sort of wish we could see them have kids and figure out if they are ever going go forgive the Potters but I can live with this ending. It is awesome work!
Absolutely loved this story, I'm hoping your thinking of maybe making a sequel to this story? ( food for thought) 😄
about the end...
Well, at least they're going off to a ''booming'' start! :-)
I loved it!!!! A very lovely end for an amazing story!!! I'm glad Harry kept true to his word to not forgive Dhalia and company! They didn't deserve it!! Have you thought to do an epilogue??? It would be great!! I wish i could read a little bit more about Harry and Draco 's married life and of course with their future children! It would be lovely!! 😸
Thanks for sharing your work!!
Ch29 - That was so sweet and so perfectly a mixture of Draco and Harry! And I was hoping that all Sisirus had got planned was some fireworks and nothing more ... Weasley (glad I was right). Although the fireworks were rather OTT - so like Sirius. Draco's love was blinding in this chapter (and throughout). Awesome stuff. SP
I liked this story. I wonder if you're gonna do a sequel?
Great chapter!!! I agreed with Harry's decision to not forgive dahlia, he was the main victim of her magic, unconscious... yes, but she hurt Harry and for me she deserves to pay for what she have done! And I guess James and Lily's attitude is a little bit naive insisting on Harry to forgive his "sister" and forget everything!! Really can't wait to read next chapter!!!
Love how Harry and Draco are dealing with everything. Harry is so right that Dahlia needs to stop crying and help herself especially if that means her parents need to step up and find her a competent mind healer.
Great that Harry is keen to keep contact with his youngest siblings. Perhaps Draco and/or Sirius can find a '101 pureblood etiquette for dummies' book to aide Harry in his knowledge.
Can't wait for the next update.
Oh my goodness Dahlia just needs smacking! (And James too for making it Harry's fault that D isn't healing). But, ever closer to bonding! Yay! SP
about #27..
As never-wracking as it felt...it's good to read about a side of Narcissa where she 'cooly' accepts Harry when it's all said & done...tho reading about her being a Mama Bear to Harry is good also. :-)
I'm glad to see that Narcissa's finally accepting Harry, and it's all thanks to Harry's love for Draco 😍 please update chapter 28 soon.
about #26..
Very well written and you conveyed the images beautifully.
Yes! In your face Dumbledore! How does it feel to know that your meddling has robbed the Potter's of a strong and powerful heir? I can't wait to see what's going to happen in chapter 27!
Revenge is so sweet and in this case so long lasting. I'm so glad Harry had the gumption to request Dumb-as-a-dore to view his core in all it's beautiful powerful, controlled and innocent glory.
Can't wait to see what Harry's ex-family will do/say now. I can see Sirius relaying his new son's core picture to the parents at just the right time (media present and public condemnation sound appropriate).
Great chapter!
Wonderful chapter!! I'm happy for Harry for trying to reconnect with his siblings! He deserves to have a family! Although he's forming a new one with Draco, I think it would be very nice for him to have a very large family, James and Lily are other story, they must do more things than just say sorry, it's a first step but it's not enough to recover the son they willingly let go! They must prove to Harry first! Dhalia of course is out of question she doesn't deserves anything! I hope to read the next chapter soon!!
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