Reviews for The English RoseBy : TempestLore |
The plot ntwist in chapter 8 (about Ginny and Draco) is quite good: I am somewhat surprised by it, but I realize it has been planted for a while in hindsight. The nature / allegiance of Ginny remains so elusive that makes the story interesting. I am also interested in the identity of the father of Hermione's child.
This makes no sense, first Ginny hates Harry, is a traitor and wants Draco for herself but now she loves Harry and is helping the resistance?
Is Hermione going to be back with Ron again? I'm sick with that pairing.
Curious who knocked up Ginny.
But not sure if I wanna continue read Malfoy pinned from a far while Hermione is back with Ron again.
I love this angsty, romantic story! I hope you have a nasty fate planned for Ginny. She makes a fine villain.
Yay, what a powerful chapter. Seeing Hermione/Rose's inner struggle admitting her love to Draco and how it was so easy for him to open up to her. And god, that ending after finally admitting her feelings to poor Draco...I'm all freaking giddy to see what happens. You are an amazing writer! Please continue updating :)
Why couldn't Draco just kill or Obliviate Ginny after thorough information gathering by Legilimency? He has no problem to use Crucio.
Eww! Ginny is foul.africam
Hmm, what is going on with Ginny and George?
"A good witch does not masturbate to the fantasy of a Malfoy."
Heh, he. Well, I'm not a good witch...
I think he knew it was Hermione all along.
I'm probably a bit odd, but I found the kiss the hottest part of that chapter.....
This is an original idea for a story; a particularly surprising role for Hermione. I'm intrigued to read more...
Please keep writing!
Love it, keep going!
Good for the most part but I'd stop using the word boyfriend, the way she uses it sounds childish and she suddenly seems like a clingy starry eyed girlfriend.
-cringe- eh did not expect Ron to bring company back but of course he had to come back for his other girlfriend. I'd like to read a little bit of Draco's POV so, have at it dearie.
The smut was good btw! I approve :D
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