Reviews for The English RoseBy : TempestLore |
This is really great story. I like the plot. Draco was so sweeeettt. You did really great. But you lil messed up start from chapter 6/7. Especially, I didn't understand when Charlie found out about Hermione. At the first Draco wanted to kept Hermione's as Rose, but suddenly Charlie greeted her as Hermione and Draco just let Charlie knew her true identity. And, I thought you have to explain several scene. Like, how Draco knew about Rose's identity, and why Hermione forgot she'd sex with Draco at tent (right after legiliment), why she'd to drank forgetfulness potion?
But overall is quite great! I love when Mal came around. And he was tooooo smart! How did he knows about sex? I laughed so hard! I couldn't imagine Hermione & Draco's face...
This has been an awesome story. I’ve been coming back to it for days and love it. I registered just to review this fic. I hope you come back to it sometime and finish it because it’s too good to leave unfinished. I’m very sorry about the loss of your sister and send my condolences.
I love his fic! I know Hermione has to remember, but how did he get her to just completely forgive him? Most of what she was mad about was because she didn't know the whole story, but she's too proud to just let it all go. Please give me more! I'm obsessed.
Hello there!
I love your story it's amazing! It's very well written and I love how you re-dreamt J. K. Rowling's ending. I hope you will write more chapters cause honestly I don't know if I can live without reading The English Rose anymore. Thank you for this magnificent story.
Lots of love
Beca
Ooohhh, im here for you. Come on remember!!.
What a twist i have been reading this and i enjoy the story. Wondering what will happen what is this secret delivery duh duh duhhhh lol
I love this story, can't believe how long I waited for this chapter, looking forward to the next one xx
Its a juicy read, loving the story line. Voldermort you dusche with the magic taking!!, please dont let draco lose his magic!!! Ahhhhh i will sit here and just wait....
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I totally messed up and wrote this review in Snowbound. Here is the link I found for your old account. I love this story and hope that you can update soon, as I am very invested in the characters. You are a wonderful writer! Happy Mother's Day!
LOVE THIS STORY! A fresh take for sure. Can't wait for more!
I've waited ages for a new chapter of this story. Can't wait for the next one xx
Your story is amazing! Can`t wait for the nexxt chapters.
Omg!!! I love this so much!! Just thought you should know!!! I love the redeemable blonde sex God wizard!!! I just want to bite him!!
the baby belongs to ron and tuesday.... i bet... i hope..
Holy moly, all of that escalated quickly! I am enjoying the fast ride in this story.
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