Ch35 - Well done for actually acknowledging that Harry's upbringing would've left scars (mental, if not physical). JKR never once seemed to address that Harry was actually abused by the Dursleys, and to a lesser extent, by Dumbledore, who left him there (and when Arabella Figg says she had watched Harry and did NOTHING - well, words fail). And yay for Snape being the one to sort Harry out!

I can see Sirius having a tough time getting guardianship of Harry, if only because he's still such a raving nut job! SP

Wow Albus is REALLY determined to get Harry to stay with Dudley in some capacity, even trying to rope Remus into things thinking that will sway Harry. It never sat well with me in canon when Severus revealed Lupins condition to the school but here, if it prevented Harry from being forced to live with someone who abused him for years, i would actually kind of not be so pressed about it. At this poiint Snape should just whip out some adoption forms since he is the only adult fully commited to Harry;s wellbeing since Sirius might not be quite stable enough to suddenly look after a child after years in a place like Azkaban.

Feel its gonna take more than a simple apology from Albus to even start to make up for leaving someone who fought alongside him in the war in a hellhole like Azkaban. If nothing else you have to be amazed at Dumbldores persistance and trying to move things into his favor and only hearing what he wants to hear despite everything. Wonder if Snape can remain unbiased during his evaluation of Sirius, if only for Harry's sake. Poor Ron finding out the truth about his Rat. That is super skeevy and terrifying to have someone like Wormtail in such close proximity over the years.

"Blaise realizes, startled, that he would fight for a lot to keep Harry that happy." Blaise getting those warm fuzzie feelings again.

Question, IF things go to plan and Sirius is exonerated and given custody of Harry, how much inlfuence/sway would Sev really have? Legally he would only have a bit of control while Harry is at school since he doesnt have custody in any real capacity of him. I could see him skirting the more legal methods of course.

Ch34: F*cking Dudley - seriously, torturing Harry?! And Dumbles STILL wants Harry to live with him?! *mutters dark curses under her breath* but yay for Severus! SP

Loved the line "Simple as Dudley"! And I grinned when Severus took care of Remus. So much plotting going on, and good for Harry to think of getting Fudge to help. SP

Oh Snape what are you planning to do.

Aw Harry wants this so badly that he is afraid that he might be dreaming. Okay that "simple as dudley" line got a chuckle out of me, wont lie. Omg all these people now vying for Harry's attention and him forgetting that his social circle ha snow widened and Theo and Blaise expect to be given at least some of the insight he chooses to give Hermione and Ron to what he does.

Ah poor Harry, the curse of being a magnetic figure to others. He just draws people in and doesnt even know it. Although eventually he is gonna have to sit his Slytherin freinds down and really hammer home that he is not one lick interested in any sort of fame or prestige and doesnt want to be this great magnetic leader of the people. Boy just wants to get through a year with his freinds safely and go live with someone who will have the capacity to actually love him and keep him safe.

I keep having to remind myself that a bit of the PoV's for this are from  Snape's/ various Slytherin/Harry's perspectives so there is going to be some unkind bias, especially from Severus for obvious reasons due to his past with some of the characters and general surly outlook on life. He has ever reason to hate Remus and Sirius so his thoughts and perceptions of them are going to be colored by that.

But i certainly hope he doesnt torpedo Harry's plans on living with Sirius. Harry wants this so badly that it hurst to see him so hopeful. Even if Severus feels he will be acting in the boys best interest. He might hate Sirius and not think him a worthy guardian but Sirius still has his inheritence to Grimmauld Place right? Plus i cant help but pick up on the jealousy he feels towards the other man with how quickly Harry's has come to care for him which could be fueling whatever he might be planning. Although quite a bit still hinges on whether the letter plan works out.

Poor Harry being in the middle of their little feud and having to verbally smack there heads together. Lol Harry getting real bold there mouthing off to Snape. Loved seeing him call the two supposed adults out on how he is puttung aside old grudges and being able to maintain friendships with both Slytherin and Gryffindors. In Sirius defense on choosing to get revenge rather than track down Harry, he really couldnt have known just how bad his life with his relatives was even if Lily told him about Petunia or the current circumstances  and 12 years in Azkaban with nothing but vengeance on the brain can mess someone up.

Im starting to lose track of all the times Harry can break my heart in this freaking story. Kid cant catch a break and even thinks his godfather would hate him just because he is a Slytherin. Aw and Snape still wanting to be apart of Harry's life even if Sirius did suceed in adopting him and even getting jealous. Maybe they could share custody.....if they could last 5 min without sniping at eachother that is.

Severus showing some admirable restraint when finally face to face with the man who helped get his best and perhaps only true friend murdered and having to listen to his piss poor excuses for the betrayal. At least he got to have some fun scaring the other man. Wonder what they will do with the info that Peter presumably knows where Voldemorts wand is.

Snape has a full time job on his hands just trying to drill into Harry's head that he doesnt have to be the big hero all the time or at all. I take it that small flash of thought about the Dursley's was Harry thinking he was evil for being okay with them being murdered? After what they put him through he should be praised for not throwing a parade. Plus he never asked Tarq to actually do anything to them so he is guiltless there.

Hah Severus making his apology and using the moment to stun Sirius, if only yo get the man off him.

Cant wait to see what comes next.

sometimes the needs of the one out weigh the needs of the many

I really liked Harry's no's.

lol and now Draco just takes a note out of Daphne's book and just folds himself into the group without bothering to ask or explain himself to hear Harry's story. While its understandable to a point that Hsrry would divulge this info to Theo and Blaise given how close they have become, i am surprised that he was willing to share the story with newcomers like Daphne and Draco. Quite a bit of trust being put there.

Loved Blaise's reaction to the revelation about Quirrell. Interesting reveal about the gifts. Harry's about had it up to here with people trying to make him into something he doest want to be. To be fair they dont know about the horocrux and Harry literally having a piece of Voldemort soul inside him to explain the parseltounge ability so there belief that what Harry was told is a lie isnt without reason.

"Or he was trying not to scare you with the truth.” Perhaps less about scaring Harry with the truth and more about not revealing pertinent and possibably game changing info before the proper moment.

Well Draco did manage to be of help and get a bit of a zinger at Theo even if it got a bit derailed by Theo reminding him that he only has one parent.

Wandless, irresistible Imperius Curse.....well thats just down right terrifying and a bit OP lol. Especially if Lucius does in fact have the gift. Would help explain how he has been able to easily worm his way out of trouble and manipulate people in power. At least Draco doesnt want to use it. Although if Lucius ever gives Harry problems in the future, this is some juicy info to have. He took the reveal quite well though, more nthan i thought he would eb able too.

Nice little friendship moment at the end. Hermione and Ron make the choice to follow Harry into danger and risk the same things as him to protect him, why shouldnt his Slytherin crew be afforded the same choice. Speaking of the two, now that Peter has been caught and Sirius confirmed to not be a threat to Harry, will Snape be lifting the ban on Harry being allowed to hang out with them without limit?

Ch30 - Oh the Slytherins are too clever! I lke that they don't automatically just believe everything that spews from Dumbledore's mouth, unlike most Gryffindors, and they are clearly edging close to the whole 'Harry is a Horcrux' thing. Draco's Gift was perfect, as was his reaction to it!

And thanks for answering my question about what Mcgonagall did - hilarious! Sp

Ch29 - Loved Draco being told to stop being stupid, and now I'm curious at exactly what McGonagall's revenge was that led to Severus stopping transformations in his room!

And it was perfect that Severus' worst outcome was the fact that he'd have to apologise to Sirius - perfect! SP

Lol Blaise taking taking up Hermiones usual role of admonishing Harry when he does something particularly reckless without telling anyone. Kudos to Blaise for getting Harry to remember the promise he made to him. Harry cant exactly get him out of an abusive household if he gets himself killed by rushing into possible danger. Well ouch, Draco cant even make one, not even mean, comment without either Theo or Blaise taking the wind out of his sails. How the mighty have fallen.

Harry with his own little slytherin entourage + Draco escorting him to breakfast. I love how Greengrass just kind up pops up and folds herself into the group even if she is not fully Harry's friend and even keeping him company.

Well Peter's capture went much easier and quicker than i thought it would and Snape was much more composed than i figured he would be considering how he was ready to either outright  murder or hand Sirius over to the Dementors for the kiss when he thought the man was the one who betrayed the Potters location and got Lily killed. Sev might have loaded the gun by revealing the prophecy to Tom but Peter selling out his friends is what pulled the trigger.

Oh apologizing to Sirius is gonna be like chewing nails for Snape lol. Kind of want to see if Sirius will be willing to apologize to back for what he did when they were in school. Curious on whether things will go to plan and hopefully Peter doesnt escape before they do. Wonder how Albus will take the new info and just how he might try to cock it up despite having 'good' intentions.

That blowup was needed, Snape needed to here Harry air his greivences and see where he was going wrong in his handling of the young man and just how unhappy he was. Poor kid is stuck between two worlds and being torn apart, cant go back to Gryffindor, cant fully become what a Slytherin is, or what some think a Slytherin is supposed to be and is feeling stifled by everyone who thinks they know whats best for him.

Hm well its one thing if Albus could cause problems for Tarquinius since the man is a 'suspected' Death Eater, wouldnt it be a wholly different manner if Sirius was given custody, especially if the Ministry wants to put the ugly business of putting him away for so long behind them and save face by not stopping him from taking in his legal godson? I would still expect Albus to try and interfere in some way but it feels like it would be much harder to do so if Harry was living with Sirius.

While Harry has indeed survived things that most adults wouldnt have a prayer, he needs to realize that he is still a child despite his accomplishments and maturing attitude. If you have to yell and pout and tell people that you're not a child thats more evidence that your ARE one. Actions speak louder.

They both made some good points and hopefully are both better from this event and hopefully Severus can help clear Blacks name and sucessfully capture Peter. Which will then possibably put the kabosh on Voldemorts ressurection plan.

Sweet ending with Sev hearing that "thank you" from Harry. He is getting better as a person and trying to listen to his better angels more. Heres hoping things dont go tits up and Sirius can be free. A little worried about what Tarquinius might do if he catches wind that Harry could possibably be taken out of his reach and whoever he has conspired with to take Harry during the summers. That man is everything people fear Sirius to be and has little reservations about doing dark deeds. Although if he interfered openly it would only serve to push Harry away.

Ch28 - Well that blow up was needed. I felt sorry for Severus, trying to help Harry and realising his mistakes, and felt sorry for Harry too, feeling trapped. Hopefully Pettigrew will get found and Harry can go home to Sirius (why am I doubting it?!) SP

Ch27 - Oh shit... Severus is not happy! As for the rest of the chapter, I really felt Harry's sense of claustrophobia. Nicely done! SP