Reviews for Dare Speak Its NameBy : Lomonaaeren |
Sweet and hot and utterly adorable. Good job! SP
Awesome! That was trilling and the shower scene was sexy as hell, really! They make an awesome pair and the quidditch community should think about making seeker doubles a thing for the next quidditch season.
and yes I do try and read all of the stories from you that I could not until till now. That's the good think if you are sick, have to stay in bed, but have a clear head. The best time for a fanfic marathon. I already feel better.
OMG!
You really captured the mood when you described Harry flying! Love that!
Although they seem pretty in sync at the end, I can't help trying to conclude the story in my head... And I'm not sure if Harry can stand this amount of confrontation in the long run. I mean, at the moment, it's a relieve for him to be free of this parents' expectations. But what about a few weeks or months from now, when he notices that they not only complete each other on the field, but perhaps clash in everyday life?
Very interesting story! Also, I like that you described the Potter-household as a normal one with normal problems and without the everything-is-good-we're-all-heroes attitude most writers seem to include. (yes, I know that this is an AU where they aren't war heroes, but still^^)
PS: As always, please forgive any mistakes as English isn't my first language^^ Still hope I could get the message across...
SP777
I have to admit, it started kind of unusual to me in the beginning, but picked up in the second chapter with the Quidditch. Who knew you'd get good at the Quidditch scenes after practically saying in the past ''I don' wanna!'' ...NOW look at you. :-)
You know what stories I miss seeing you do...the trilogies. Have any good ones planned?
I did enjoy the conclusion!! 😍 I love the way they stood together, and were in sync like they're totally meant to be! Merry Christmas!!
🔥🔥🔥 I freaking loved it and can't wait to read more!
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