Reviews for Breaking TiesBy : babyandi11 |
I am really loving the story so far, can't wait until the next chapter.
This was beautifully written the character development is very strong in the plot line is doing amazingly well and actually following the original story plot line but you've tweaked it just enough to be yours it's amazing and wonderful I love it
Dumbledore must be raging mad after what Harry did. Ron is an arse. Good luck with your classes. A lot of stuff gets crammed into 8 weeks so don't worry about updates we will still be here.
I hope you have a really bad ending for Ron !!!!!!!! asshole that he is...hope all that know Harry will back him and not Ron , they know that Ron is stupid !!!! Thanks again for the udpates !!!!!!!!! pls. pls. make dubbledork eat grass !!!!!!
Happy New Year to you also !!!!!!!!!! thanks for the updates !!!!! can't wait to see Ron's ass hit the floor..asshole that he is !!!!! so happy that Hermione and Ginny and the reat are with Harry !!!!!! made my day with that one . Well hope to see more soon , enjoy your day !!:):):):)
I really really like the way this story is going. It's a quick pace but not so quick that one feels like they are missing something. It's really refreshing!! Definitely looking forward to more chapters! :)
Why is the Ministry going to arrest Harry?
i love this story.
Ha! That's what the sneaky old bat gets!! Super glad Snape had some on him!! And Ron can screw smoothly off!!
*Giggles in evil glee* can't wait for the fallout!
I love how this story goes. I always think both the light and dark side were wrong, in most points, and a 3rd 'side' isnt so popular so I'm happy to find this. Awaiting your next chapter.
The stretching is an issue with mobile. AFF is not very compatible with mobile devices. That's why you don't see it on a computer.
I love this story and am so glad I found it! Thank you for sharing with us. I hope your little ones gets well soon. I know how difficult it is with a sick kiddo. Thank you again.
You're building a very nice story. Do you by chance look why some of the chapters don't stay within the borders, chapters 3, 8, 12, 13, 14?
This one should be good. I had never thought of a third party angle. Mine was puzzling how to keep Draco and Harry together and still have children via Astoria and Ginny. I look forward to the continuing episodes.
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