Reviews for TangoBy : Alcoholic_Rootbeer |
I am so in love with this story!!! Please don't stop writing it. I hope all is well. I just started following you on facebook and can't wait to read more of your work.
Well, those were two very different dates. ha ha ha I enjoyed the comfort, fun, and romance of Draco and Hermione's, as much as the honest, open, sex-driven night Ron and Astoria had. I like this version of Astoria, as she comes into her own and goes for what/who she wants. I also love how blindsided Ron is by it all. :-) For Hermione, I am glad she let go, despite her "friends" speech to herself, and relaxed into her day. Draco's inner monologue was thoughtful and as sweet as it was sad. I wonder when Ron and Astoria will be exposed though. lol She's not even trying to be discreet, and George isn't the quiet type. lol Looking forward to more whenever you give it to us. :-)
Sorry you weren't doing well and I really do hope things are on the upswing for you. Thank you, HG4eva
yay. great update. better late than never.
now can Hermione please change her mind, have them apparare back together, and give us a wonderful climax to the plot in the next chapter???
I absolutely adore this incredible, artfully and enchantly written story! You are a wonderful writer love. But please do include more of Astoria x Ron side of the story as I'm quite fascinated by these charming characters!
short but sweet. I'm hoping the next chapter is longer
I enjoyed Draco's morning of happiness and reflection, almost as much as Astoria's maturity, growth, and acknowledgement of them being through. Actually, I loved her in this whole chapter! She gained strength, friendliness, and self-belief all in one day. Poor Ron doesn't stand a chance. lol Though, he doesn't know where to meet her, unless she's coming back for him, so he might blow it. ha ha ha And, Bad George! :-) He was (perfectly) evil in this one. His one-liners cracked me up!! Draco and Hermione's lunch was fun and amusing. Her not being able to decide if it was friends or more, but them not seeming to be able to let go of one another, was great! I look forward to the rest of their day, since it appears lunch wasn't enough for either of them. :-) Thank you!
Re: Chapter 22
And yet again, Draco drives Hermione batty. I like that wrinkle in their relationship.
This is getting to be such fun! Oh the drama when the mothers and the press find out. Can't wait to see how it all plays out. 😉
Oh I am really really loving this story, at last it looks like there might be a bit of good luck for Ron. Thank you for this brilliant story xxx
Hey there. Sorry about the Draco "bashing." lol I know he will step up and do things correctly, as now seen. I His friendship with Blaise is very intresting to read. They're like frenemies who have no choice but to stick together. ha ha ha Truly though, I am very happy to see Draco realizing how much he has to figure out and what he needs to do to do so; and that he sees Hermione can't be a default choice. Ginny's support was fun and funny to read, as she really doesn't like Draco, but was willing to support her friend. Love her! And, Hermione... poor confused, thing. :-) She has some acknowledging to do, as well. It's not all on him to admit feelings and decide what to do about them. Speaking of which, poor Greg. Another lovely update and I thank you!
Hello! Coming out of the shadows to say how much I'm enjoying this story. I usually hate Tuesdays, but I have this to look forward to now!
Also, you made a comment about getting negative feedback on Draco. I just wanted to say that I'm finding your portrayal of him really refreshing. Flawed and arrogant and compassionate and caring. He's an actual adult male dealing with actual adult problems. I'm not sure what anyone else would complain about, but I like that he's conflicted about Astoria. While we all know that Dramione is the best, HE doesn't know that yet and having loyalty to Astoria, even while conflicted, is a very admirable and very human trait.
Keep up the great work and see you next Tuesday! (...which is a terribly rude thing to say, but it made me laugh)
Of course first I say thank you for the update. :-) Wonderful, as always. I am glad they've "taken a break", but that's not ending it. As much as I want Astoria to decide that she wants to not be with him, I don't want it to be that easy for him. He doesn't deserve easy and her ending it would put him in the clear. He needs to grow up and grow a set. I hope Hermione makes that clear to him; she's no one's second choice or fallback girl. I look forward to her talk with Ginny. :-) HG4eva
There's no surprise that you had an award for this story, I'm loving it, and wait for the next chapter with excitement. Looking forward to further reading xxx
ah, sweet relief at the romance. now I'm on the edge of my seat until next Tuesday's update
yay! so close! great chapter. I can't wait for next Tuesday's update
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