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Reviews for More Powerful Than Magic

By : Sasunarufan13
  • From moodysavage on January 20, 2018

    Really sweet! I liked the double wishes part especially.

    Slight usage errors (since you asked if we spotted any) 

    Without deigning TO GIVE the house elves...14 paragraphs down when Lucius comes home.

    There was a high pitched (not pitching) sound...5 paragraphs after the BOOM


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  • From Calmzone1 on December 19, 2017

    I would love to see a continuation of this one. Especially when they have Harry examined and Severus discovers that his Lily’s boy was hurt and starved. I would love to see Dumbledore talk his way out of this one. Would they discover about Sirius still being listed as Guardian? Would Remus or any other friends show up?  Hmm. 


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  • From Serpensangel on October 14, 2017

    Love! If you ever decide, u should totally make a sequel to this.


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  • From CDGaymer on February 14, 2017

    Very good story.

    But i see one MAJOR mistake. It is a oneshot. I think you should make it into a full blown story.


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  • From ANON - anon on January 03, 2017
    really good. would like a sequel or another chappy when the boys are older. this would be a really interesting au.
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