Reviews for DaydreamsBy : BitterWind |
Pleaseeee finish this story ðŸ˜
That was a really good chapter. It's nice to see Draco learning to trust Hermione and she is opening herself up to him
Well go on Hermione! First, you are simply brilliant and second, that's one way to move things forward. lol Thanks! HG4eva
Wow. This just got really good. More please
Well that escalated fast. I'm happy to see that draco is slowly changing and even Hermione. I can't wait to see where you take this story. I also love the potion that allows to see people's daydreams, their conscious desires.
Well, that escalated quickly. lol I loved that she took charge and went for it. I wish I had that courage. :-) I am enjoying how out of his depth he is. Thank you! HG4eva
Yessss! I love this take charge but timid Hermione. And I love how she is subconsciously making Draco a better person and getting him back to being a regular student again without him even realizing. Loved the cupboard scene and hoping for more LEMONS!
Interesting premise: a potion to allow seeing daydreams. I love it when authors come up with new applications or forms of magic as you have here. Looking forward to more of this story.
Highly intrigued by your story. I can't wait to see where you take this. Obviously both Hermione and Draco needd something. I just hope that Draco doesn't take advantage of Hermione. Also Lucius seems like he would cause trouble. Why would he be made a teacher? He doesn't seem to have changed.
An interesting and intriguing beginning... I have no idea how they let that, I will call him a man for the sake of being nice, near children or the potions with which to kill them all. He doesn't seem to have changed a whit! I know Draco is suffering and a very small part of me feels a tad sorry for him, but knowing his previous attitude and getting to see it now, I think he still has a lot of growing up to do before he becomes a decent human being. I say all that, but I am already all in with the story, as you write it beautifully and your descriptions are great! Thank you and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
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