Reviews for Say It with FlowersBy : Sasunarufan13 |
So amazing! Absoutely love!
Absolutely loved the ending! 😍
Really enjoyed this story! I love the romance, Draco was absolutely brilliant, great characterization.
P.S. Pinks are some of my favorite flowers, they smell so good.
about #7...
I have to say it IS rare to see these type of romantic stories nowadays. So it was a treat to read and the proposal Draco did was something some men should inspire to do when committing to their significant other....hell it put a smile on my face!
I loved Harry's thoughts during their bonding. I think it was welldone.
I did miss seeing a scene where they talked about Harry taking the job at Hogwarts and how they handled moving there, if they did. Since it appears he took the job as he was thinking about students.
Really enjoying.
Absolutely love this story, and the way Draco expresses his feelings through the flowers, to me that seems even more romantic then simply saying it, can't wait for chapter 8😍
Not rushed but the not beibg aware of the timing of the scenes confused me a little. However, sing that, the bedroom scene was very nicely done.
A tiny bit mean of Harry to spring that on Ron in public! Lol And I'm with Draco when it comes to Ginny.
Well, I don't think it was too fast. Usually I want to run a Harry over with a clue bus, so this was good!
Nice first kiss.
OH MY GOD! My heart is racing with the end of this chapter, can't wait to see what you have in store for our boys next.
I absolutely love this story! So sweet, it had me smiling all the way through. And I don't think you hurried things at all with this chapter. We were getting to the point where they had to acknowledge their feelings. I'm glad you didn't drag it out any longer. Can't wait for the next chapter!
This was lovely! Beautiful and sweet: the perfect way to end this story.... however, if you decide to keep writing, I know I'll keep reading! Wonderful story, my dear!
For someone who doesn't know what they're doing, you're doing a good job. :-p
Plus you're successfully characterizing Teddy as a BABY, which some authors don't like to bother doing because it's ''oh so simple'' to just portray him as a teenager.
..and the buildup with Harry & Draco is nice.
If I admit I did a little celebration dance at the breakup does that make me a bad person? TeeHee
Really loved this chapter so much even if we did have to endure a bit of Ginny on Valentines.
And since you asked for nitpicks (LOL) in the scene during the Valentines date, you had Ginny sitting back in her "hair" instead of chair
about #3...
Very nice! ...and we are getting somewhere with their 'relationship' sorta
PS: why do I have to sign in to review....are they messing with the site...AGAIN???
But no angst is gooooooood! Icky Ginny kiss though, sigh. *snickers*
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