Reviews for TwistedBy : BB_Rosie & ArielKidd |
Let's just say the only reason you're probably not getting reviews is because we, as readers, are lazy. I absolutely LOVE your story! And PLS don't fill it with filler non-sense! I also hate it when that happens. I am in the process of writing my own fanfic but I feel pressured to start with boring nonsensical material that is the same in basically all fics.
Also, I really hope you get better!! <3
very dark. twisted is an apt name. I like the action in each chapter
I love this! I check to see if its updated every day and I'm glad that your chapters actually move the story on. I once read a 60 chapter fanfic where it felt like the marriage/happy ending was ten chapters before the end. It got boring. Dont worry.
Also don't worry about not having many reviewers because you have many readers and many more reviews than some fics. Tbh I only review my absolute favourite stories. I wish I could give you kudos for every chapter. Get well soon!
Fantastica questa storia è meravigliosa piena di suspense e sono curiosa di leggere il continuo draco é forte e dark in ogni sfumatura non sai mai cosa sta pensando ma più di tutto cosa vuole realmente da hermione?
I like the character development you got going so far. Please continue I wish to read where this all goes.
First, I hope things start turning around d for you health wise.
Second, Bloody fuckety fuck. This is freaking awesome! More as soon as you can!
Your sorry is getting interesting. I'm hoping to see more soon. Will Hermione start to fall for Malfoy? Is Harry jealous, or is he so wrapped up in his needs that he doesn't care?
This is the first review I've ever written! I'm not a writer but I do love a good read, and this is certainly a great one! Excited for and looking forward to your next post. :)
I hope that you are recovering, and feeling better. I'm very sorry you're ill! Super excited to see an update on the story! I still absolutely adore it!
Firstly, I hope you're feeling much better and making a speedy recovery!!
Secondly, ahmigad im loving your fic so much! I can't wait for your next update to find out all about the date! I've got my fingers crossed for a bit of sexual tension ;)
Please don't keep me in suspense for long! X
Yay another update!!! I'm super excited for the date. Pls don't discontinue this story! Also I hope you're feeling better :( from your hospital stay!
Your dedication doesnt go unappreciated! You are talented and really there for your readers! Keep doing what you can but focus on being healthy!! You need to recuperate and rest! Glad you were able to overcome the illness and impatiently being patient for the next chapter!! Much love and support, ~ Sage
I hope you feel better soon! What a wonderful update, I can't wait until "the date". I wonder what is in story for Hermione, because Blaise's advice seems more like a warning to me. I wonder what "trap" Draco has planned? Great chapter!
This update made my day! I hope you get well soon (is it selfish to wish you spend your recovery time reading, writing and resting?).
I'm not certain what I think about any of this. Personally, I find it enchanting, but I LIKE this sort of thing. However for Hermione's sake, I'm concerned. She's practically pissing her panties and hasn't shown the slightest inclination toward liking what's happening to her. I am all about the chase. But if your prey isn't enjoying the chase as well, you're nothing but a stalker, sexual harasser, and...given the fact that Zabini pretty much rufied poor Luna...possibly a rapist. I just wanted to offer you some food for thought as you move forward.
P.S. The spell is Priori Incantatem. I thought you might like to know.
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